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Aug. 5, 2025

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My Cat Has a Problem on her Claw (133)

Last Friday, I noticed one of my cat claws looked black.

I thought I should take her to the vet right away, but the vet was supposed to be close until next Tuesday.

I called them if they would see my cat on Saturday because I thought it might be an emergency.

However, they said "Sorry we can't see your cat because the vet is away" and I booked my appointment on Tuesday.

I was worried about her claw leaving for four days.

Today, I finally took my cat to the vet and found out her claw was infected.

She wore a cone around her neck to prevent licking her claw.


先週の金曜日、私の猫の爪の一本が真っ黒になってるのに気がつきました。

私は、すぐに動物病院に連れて行った方がいいと思いましたが、その病院は次の週の火曜日までお休みということになっていました。

私は、もしかして、彼らが土曜日に私の猫を見てくれるかなと思い電話しました。私は、緊急性があるかと思いました。

でも彼らは「ドクターが不在の為見ることができません」と言いました。だから、火曜日に予約をしました。

彼女の爪を4日間も放っておくなんて心配でした。

今日やっと彼女を動物病院に連れて行って、彼女の爪が化膿していることがわかりました。

彼女は爪をなめないようにする為に首の周りにエリザベスカラーをつけました。

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My Cat Has a Problem on her Claw

Last Friday, I noticed one of my cat's claws lookturned black.

Or "Looked dark" compared to the rest of her claws.

I thought I shouldneeded to take her to the vet right away, but the vet was supposed to be closed until next Tuesday.

Since the context is urgent, using "need" works best for this phrase and since you're talking about the past, it would become "needed" as past-tense.

I called them to ask if they would see my cat on Saturday because I thought it might be an emergency.

Another you can say, "I thought it might be urgent."

However, they said "Sorry we can't see your cat because the vet is away" andso I booked my appointment on Tuesday.

I was worried about leaving her claw leavingalone (or "the way it is") for four days.

Today, I finally took my cat to the vet and found out her claw was infected.

She wore a cone around her neck to prevent licking her claw.

Feedback

I'm sorry to hear about what happened to one of your cat's claws, I'm glad that it was resolved!

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sachisachi

Aug. 5, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections and kind comments.

OPTION A (In MLA Format): My Cat Has a Problem on hHer Claw
OPTION B (In APA Format): My cat has a claw problem

Last Friday, I noticed one of my cat claws looked blackdarkly sallow.

I thought I should take her to the vet right away, but the vet was supposedchedule to be closed until next Tuesday.

I called them if they would be willing see my cat on Saturday because I thought it mightseemed to be an emergency.

However, they saidreplied, "Sorry we can't see your cat because the vet is away" and I booked my appointment on Tuesday.

MY GUESS: I was worried about her claw leaving for four daysa possible claw infection.

NOTE: The phrase "for four days" can be deleted - readers can infer that information.

ALSO POSSIBLE: Today, I finally took my cat to the vet and found out her claw washad become infected.

She wore a cone around her neck to prevent her from licking her claw.

Feedback

Hope the cat recovers.

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sachisachi

Aug. 5, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections and kind comments!

My Cat Has a Problem on Claw


Last Friday, I noticed one of my cat claws looked black.


Last Friday, I noticed one of my cat claws looked blackdarkly sallow.

Last Friday, I noticed one of my cat's claws lookturned black.

Or "Looked dark" compared to the rest of her claws.

I thought I should take her to the vet right away, but the vet was supposed to be close until next Tuesday.


I thought I should take her to the vet right away, but the vet was supposedchedule to be closed until next Tuesday.

I thought I shouldneeded to take her to the vet right away, but the vet was supposed to be closed until next Tuesday.

Since the context is urgent, using "need" works best for this phrase and since you're talking about the past, it would become "needed" as past-tense.

I called them if they would see my cat on Saturday because I thought it might be an emergency.


I called them if they would be willing see my cat on Saturday because I thought it mightseemed to be an emergency.

I called them to ask if they would see my cat on Saturday because I thought it might be an emergency.

Another you can say, "I thought it might be urgent."

However, they said "Sorry we can't see your cat because the vet is away" and I booked my appointment on Tuesday.


However, they saidreplied, "Sorry we can't see your cat because the vet is away" and I booked my appointment on Tuesday.

However, they said "Sorry we can't see your cat because the vet is away" andso I booked my appointment on Tuesday.

I was worried about her claw leaving for four days.


MY GUESS: I was worried about her claw leaving for four daysa possible claw infection.

NOTE: The phrase "for four days" can be deleted - readers can infer that information.

I was worried about leaving her claw leavingalone (or "the way it is") for four days.

Today, I finally took my cat to the vet and found out her claw was infected.


ALSO POSSIBLE: Today, I finally took my cat to the vet and found out her claw washad become infected.

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She wore a cone around her neck to prevent licking her claw.


She wore a cone around her neck to prevent her from licking her claw.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My Cat Has a Problem on her Claw


OPTION A (In MLA Format): My Cat Has a Problem on hHer Claw
OPTION B (In APA Format): My cat has a claw problem

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My Cat Has a Problem on her Claw (133)


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