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sachisachi

Jan. 30, 2025

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My cat doesn't eat food much.

She eats food, but always goes somewhere after having a bite or two bites.

However, she comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eat again.

I wonder she suddenly remembers she haven't finished her food.

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?


私の猫はご飯をあまり食べません。

食べるけど、一口か二口食べた後すぐどこかへ行ってしまいます。

でも、15分後くらいたつと戻ってきてまた食べ始めます。

彼女は、ご飯がまだ食べ終わっていないことを、急に思い出すのかなあ。

「彼女は、ご飯を食べてる途中で、どこかへ行ってしまう」って言えますか?

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My cat doesn't eat food muchmuch food.

Or "My cat doesn't eat very much".

She eats food, but always goesalways wanders off somewhere after having a bite or two bites.

However, she usually comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eat again.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food.

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

Yes! Maybe "After she's halfway done with her food she goes somewhere else for a bit."

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Nice work! I love cats, I wanted to give you some feedback on your writing. Please write some more pieces about your cat if it makes you happy!

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sachisachi

March 30, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections and kind comment. I'll try to write about my cats more(^^)

My cat doesn't eat food muchmuch food.

She eats some food, but always goes somewhthen wanders would were after having a bite or two bites.

However, she comes back15 minutes later, she returns to ther bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to then nibbles on her meatl again.

I wonder she suddenly remembers whether she haven't finished her food.

Can I also say, "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her foodoften wanders off somewhere, despite her found remains half-eaten"?

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sachisachi

Feb. 1, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

My cat doesn't eat food much(that) much food.

She eats foodwill start to eat, but always goes away somewhere after only having a bite or two bites.

You can also say:
"after only having a couple of bites"

However, she comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eat again.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers that she havesn't finished her food yet.

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

"halfway through eating her food" is very natural English -- great job.

You can use it like this:

→ She almost always wanders off somewhere halfway through eating her food

→ Halfway through eating her food, she often wanders off somewhere

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Great post!

Some really natural English in this post (suddenly remembers; halfway through eating; having a bite).

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sachisachi

Jan. 31, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections. I'm trying to use the phrase "halfway through", so I can understand it. Thank you for explaining !

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Feb. 3, 2025

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→ We only made it halfway through the movie before we got bored and turned it off.

→ Halfway up the trail, we found a small cabin and took a break

→ I was halfway through my dinner when there was a sudden knock at the door

→ Halfway through the flight, they started serving food and drinks

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lummers

Feb. 3, 2025

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→ We were already halfway through the project when leadership decided to scrap it

→ I'm halfway through my cash for the week.. I hope I'll have enough for the rest of the week.

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sachisachi

Feb. 4, 2025

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Whoa! Thank you so much for the examples!! I appreciate your help!

My cat doesn't eat foodvery much food.

She eats food, but she always goes somewhere else after having a bite or two bites.

However, she comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eat again.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food.

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

You can say "She goes somewhere else when she is halfway through eating her food" or "She goes away when she is halfway through eating her food"

In your sentence, I think a slightly more natural sounding translation of 途中で is "in the middle of." For example, "She goes somewhere else when she's in the middle of eating her food."

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I remember you wrote about your cats Luna and Purry last year. Is this Luna or Purry who doesn't eat very much? 😁

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sachisachi

Jan. 30, 2025

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Purry! She doesn't eat very much. After she goes away, Luna comes and eat her food. Luna eats a lot of food😂 By the way, do you think Purry sounds weird for cat name?

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sachisachi

Jan. 30, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

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Ashitaka

Jan. 31, 2025

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Purry and Luna seem like they're very different! 😆

I think Purry sounds cute and doesn't sound weird. The name Purry makes me think of a cat who likes to purr a lot. 😄

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sachisachi

Feb. 1, 2025

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Exactly!! She is always purring. When I start to stroke her, she starts to purr immediately. She is always ready to purr😂I'm glad it doesn't sound weird.

My cat doesn't eat food muchmuch food.

My cat doesn't eat much food.

She eats food, but always goes somewhere after having a bite or two bites.

She eats food, but always goes somewhere after having a bite or two.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she hasn't finished her food.

Can I also say, "SWhy would she goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

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Nice!

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sachisachi

Jan. 30, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

My Cat

My cat doesn't eat food much.

This is unclear as we don't know if your cat doesn't eat food very often, or if, when she does eat, she eats little food. I would recommend either:
"My cat doesn't eat very often" or
"My cat doesn't eat very much food" (Based on the rest of your text, this option seems best adapted)

She does eats food, but always goes somewhereaway after having a bite or two bites.

This is not incorrect grammatically, but I've just adapted to sound more natural.

However, she comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eating again.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food.

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

Yes, but you should change or qualify the word "somewhere". For example ""She goes away when she is halfway through eating her food"? or ""She goes somewhere else when she is halfway through eating her food"?

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Well written - I just corrected some details. I wish my cat would do that - she just eats and eats all the time and so the vet is always telling us that she is overweight!

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sachisachi

Jan. 30, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections! Your cat eats a lot of food? So cute😄but you must be worried about her/him.

My Cat

My cat doesn't eat food much.

She eats food, but always goes somewhere else after having a bite or two bites.

However, she comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eat again.

I wonder she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food yet.

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

"somewhere else"

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Haha, I have 2 cats myself. They do that intuitively, to store food for later. That is why if they see the bottom of the bowl empty, they think they will run out of resources.

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sachisachi

Jan. 30, 2025

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Ahh, I see. Interesting! That's how they survive. Thank you for your corrections!

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shadowfax26

Jan. 30, 2025

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You are welcome!

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My cat doesn't eat food much.


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My cat doesn't eat food much.

This is unclear as we don't know if your cat doesn't eat food very often, or if, when she does eat, she eats little food. I would recommend either: "My cat doesn't eat very often" or "My cat doesn't eat very much food" (Based on the rest of your text, this option seems best adapted)

My cat doesn't eat food muchmuch food.

My cat doesn't eat much food.

My cat doesn't eat foodvery much food.

My cat doesn't eat food much(that) much food.

My cat doesn't eat food muchmuch food.

My cat doesn't eat food muchmuch food.

Or "My cat doesn't eat very much".

She eats food, but always goes somewhere after having a bite or two bites.


She eats food, but always goes somewhere else after having a bite or two bites.

She does eats food, but always goes somewhereaway after having a bite or two bites.

This is not incorrect grammatically, but I've just adapted to sound more natural.

She eats food, but always goes somewhere after having a bite or two bites.

She eats food, but always goes somewhere after having a bite or two.

She eats food, but she always goes somewhere else after having a bite or two bites.

She eats foodwill start to eat, but always goes away somewhere after only having a bite or two bites.

You can also say: "after only having a couple of bites"

She eats some food, but always goes somewhthen wanders would were after having a bite or two bites.

She eats food, but always goesalways wanders off somewhere after having a bite or two bites.

However, she comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eat again.


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However, she comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eating again.

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However, she comes back15 minutes later, she returns to ther bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to then nibbles on her meatl again.

However, she usually comes back to the bowl after about 15 minutes, and starts to eat again.

I wonder she suddenly remembers she haven't finished her food.


I wonder she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food yet.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she hasn't finished her food.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers that she havesn't finished her food yet.

I wonder she suddenly remembers whether she haven't finished her food.

I wonder if she suddenly remembers she havesn't finished her food.

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?


Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

"somewhere else"

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

Yes, but you should change or qualify the word "somewhere". For example ""She goes away when she is halfway through eating her food"? or ""She goes somewhere else when she is halfway through eating her food"?

Can I also say, "SWhy would she goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

You can say "She goes somewhere else when she is halfway through eating her food" or "She goes away when she is halfway through eating her food" In your sentence, I think a slightly more natural sounding translation of 途中で is "in the middle of." For example, "She goes somewhere else when she's in the middle of eating her food."

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

"halfway through eating her food" is very natural English -- great job. You can use it like this: → She almost always wanders off somewhere halfway through eating her food → Halfway through eating her food, she often wanders off somewhere

Can I also say, "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her foodoften wanders off somewhere, despite her found remains half-eaten"?

Can I also say "She goes somewhere, when she is halfway through eating her food"?

Yes! Maybe "After she's halfway done with her food she goes somewhere else for a bit."

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