March 2, 2025
My Cat (5)
Bao doesn't hide in the corner anymore and has a good appetite.
But there are some problems. First of all, Bao is shedding excessively. Whenever I touch him, I get lots of fur on my hand.
Besides that, he vomits frequently. Nearly 1-2 times every two days.
Moreover, his nails are long, but he doesn't let anyone trim them.
For now, I can only observe these problems for some time and then decide how to handle them later.
我家的猫（5）
现在小宝不再躲起来，胃口也很好。
但也发现了它的一些问题。首先，小宝的掉毛很严重，一手摸上去全是毛。
另外，它也经常呕吐。几乎隔一天就会吐一次。
而且，它的指甲很长，但又不让人帮他剪指甲。
这些问题现在只能先再观察一段时间，再看如何处理了。
My Cat (5)
Bao doesn't hide in the corner anymore and has a good appetite.
But there are some problems.
First of all, Bao is shedding excessively.
Whenever I touch him, I get lots of fur on my hand.
Besides that, he vomits frequently.—about once or twice every two days.
Moreover, his nailclaws are long, but he doesn't let anyone trim them.
For now, I can only observe these problems for some time and then decide how to handle them later.
Feedback
To help with the shedding, you could brush him every day. Many cats like to be brushed. :-)
Cats normally scratch on wooden things to keep their claws from getting too long. You could get him a scratching post if there isn’t anything in your home for him to scratch.
March 5, 2025
Thank you for your advice and corrections.
My Cat (5)
Bao doesn't hide in the corner anymore and has a good appetite.
But there are still some problems.
Your test was not incorrect, but adding "still" is more logical to show that some issues still remain with Bao.
First of all, Bao is shedding excessively.
Whenever I touch him, I get lots of fur on my hand.
BesidesOn top of that, he vomits frequently.
Again, I'm just adding precisions - your text was fine.
Nearly 1-2 times every two days.
You could also say "every second day"
Moreover, his nailclaws are long, but he doesn't let anyone trim them.
People have nails, cats have claws.
For now, I can only observe these problems for some time and then decide how to handle them later.
Feedback
Great writing. I know I am being picky about details, but hopefully it will help you improve even further.
Best of luck with Bao!
March 5, 2025
Thank you for your corrections. It's very helpful.
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Whenever I touch him, I get lots of fur on my hand. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides that, he vomits frequently.
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Nearly 1-2 times every two days. Nearly 1-2 times every two days. You could also say "every second day" |
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Bao doesn't hide in the corner anymore and has a good appetite. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But there are some problems. But there are still some problems. Your test was not incorrect, but adding "still" is more logical to show that some issues still remain with Bao. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, his nails are long, but he doesn't let anyone trim them. Moreover, his People have nails, cats have claws. Moreover, his |
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