Jan. 11, 2024
My cat
I prezent our cat. Her name is Mici and she is 2 years old. His eyes are yellow and his fur is black. I play with it every day. He lives in our garden and has his own nook on the terrace. He is very lazy. We always give him fresh water, cat food and some leftovers. He loves it when I pet him because he always purrs. I really like him because he is cute and lazy. He always cheers me up.
What else can I write, do you have any ideas?
Bemutatom a cicánkat. A neve Mici és 2 éves. Sárga a szeme és fekete a bundája. Minden nap játszok vele. A kertünkben él és van saját kuckója a teraszon. Sokat lustálkodik. Mindig adunk neki frissz vizet, macskakaját és egy kis maradékot. Szereti amikor simogatom mert akkor mindig dorombol. Nagyon szeretem őt mert cuki és lusta. Ő minidig felvidít engem.
Mit írjak még van ötlet?
I prezsent our cat.
Heris name is Mici and she is 2 years old.
"His" is masculine, used for boys. "Her" is feminine, used for girls. If your cat is a boy, you would use "his"
Since you used "him" and "his" in most of the sentences, I am assuming your cat is a boy.
I play with ithim every day.
Calling an animal an "it" is rude in English. Calling a loved Pet "it" is unnatural.
I prezsent our cat.
Heris name is Mici and she is 2 years old.
Every other sentence refers to Mici as a "he".
I play with ithim every day.
He loves it when I pet him because, and he always purrs.
Using "because" makes it sound like the reason he likes to be pet is because he's purring. But it is the other way around. The cause of a cat purring is petting.
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Good work! Maybe you can write about what kind of games he likes to play, or what he likes to do in the garden.
I prezsent our cat.
Heris name is Mici and she is 2 years old.
Is your cat a boy or a girl?
Boy -> "His name is Mici and he is 2 years old."
Girl -> "Her name is Mici and she is 2 years old."
I play with ithim every day.
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Your writing is very good! I like cute and lazy cats, too.
I prezsent our cat.
Hiser eyes are yellow and hiser fur is black.
it was her in the first sentence so it should be the same if it's a female cat
I play with ither every day.
for people/animals it's a little uncomfortable to use "it"
HShe lives in our garden and has hiser own nook on the terrace.
just making gender consistent for the rest*
HShe is very lazy.
We always give himer fresh water, cat food and some leftovers.
Do you always give the leftovers? Or do you mean something like "everyday"?
HI know she loves it when I pet himer because she always purrs.
This feels a little weird to me since I'm not sure what you're trying to say is the "why" so I made a guess.
I really like himer because she is cute and lazy.
HShe always cheers me up.
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I'm not sure if Mici is male or female so sorry for the less helpful consistency corrections. In general most of these short sentences have correct grammar and good basic word choice. The only sort of ambiguous sentence is the one about purring. The writing feels a little out of order but sentence by sentence most of this is fine on it's own. I really liked the bit about the cat cheering you up!
Jan. 11, 2024
Mici is a boy
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I play with it every day. I play with for people/animals it's a little uncomfortable to use "it" I play with I play with I play with Calling an animal an "it" is rude in English. Calling a loved Pet "it" is unnatural. |
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He lives in our garden and has his own nook on the terrace.
just making gender consistent for the rest* |
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He is very lazy.
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We always give him fresh water, cat food and some leftovers. We always give h Do you always give the leftovers? Or do you mean something like "everyday"? |
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He loves it when I pet him because he always purrs.
This feels a little weird to me since I'm not sure what you're trying to say is the "why" so I made a guess. He loves it when I pet him Using "because" makes it sound like the reason he likes to be pet is because he's purring. But it is the other way around. The cause of a cat purring is petting. |
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He always cheers me up.
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What else can I write, do you have any ideas? |
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I really like him because he is cute and lazy. I really like h |
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