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Feb. 7, 2022

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My cat

My cat is white and black. She is my pets and she is very cute and nice. She drinks on favourite hot milk and her favourite food is fish.
She has green eyes and is 1,40 m tall and plays with a toy-mouse and sleep with me on my bed. We go every weekend play in the park. When I tickle her jerks her nose and great news my veterinarian my cat become babies birth. I am so happy of the new cats and I will all prepare .


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My cat

My cat is white and black.

She is my pets and she is very cute and nice.

She drinks onHer favourite drink is hot milk and her favourite food is fish.

She has green eyes and is 1,.40 m tall and, plays with a toy-mouse and sleep with me on my bed.

We go every weekend to play in the park.

When I tickle her, she jerks her nose and. It is great news that my veterinarian my cat become babies birthgave me. My cat will give birth to kittens.

Babies are kittens

I am so happy ofabout the new catkittens and I will allbe prepare d.

We go every weekend play in the parkplay at the park every weekend.

The other person who corrected your entry didn't catch the "in" mistake you made. It's always "at" when talking about what you did at the park.

My cat

My cat is white and black.

This is correct, though typically we reverse it and say "black and white."

She is my pets and she is very cute and nice.

She drinks onHer favourite drink is hot milk and her favourite food is fish.

She has green eyes and, is 1,.40 m tall and, plays with a toy- mouse, and sleeps with me on my bed.

We go every weekend to play in the park.

"Every weekend, we go to the park to play," sounds more natural.

When I tickle her, she jerks her nose and. And I got some great news: my veterinarian says my cat become babies birthis pregnant.

You might want to say "wrinkles her nose" or "jerks away" instead.

I am so happy ofexcited for the new catkittens and I will all prepare am preparing for their arrival.

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Congratulations! That's so exciting. What is your cat's name?

My cat


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My cat is white and black.


My cat is white and black.

This is correct, though typically we reverse it and say "black and white."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She is my pets and she is very cute and nice.


She is my pets and she is very cute and nice.

She is my pets and she is very cute and nice.

She drinks on favourite hot milk and her favourite food is fish.


She drinks onHer favourite drink is hot milk and her favourite food is fish.

She drinks onHer favourite drink is hot milk and her favourite food is fish.

She has green eyes and is 1,40 m tall and plays with a toy-mouse and sleep with me on my bed.


She has green eyes and, is 1,.40 m tall and, plays with a toy- mouse, and sleeps with me on my bed.

She has green eyes and is 1,.40 m tall and, plays with a toy-mouse and sleep with me on my bed.

We go every weekend play in the park.


We go every weekend to play in the park.

"Every weekend, we go to the park to play," sounds more natural.

We go every weekend play in the parkplay at the park every weekend.

The other person who corrected your entry didn't catch the "in" mistake you made. It's always "at" when talking about what you did at the park.

We go every weekend to play in the park.

When I tickle her jerks her nose and great news my veterinarian my cat become babies birth.


When I tickle her, she jerks her nose and. And I got some great news: my veterinarian says my cat become babies birthis pregnant.

You might want to say "wrinkles her nose" or "jerks away" instead.

When I tickle her, she jerks her nose and. It is great news that my veterinarian my cat become babies birthgave me. My cat will give birth to kittens.

Babies are kittens

I am so happy of the new cats and I will all prepare .


I am so happy ofexcited for the new catkittens and I will all prepare am preparing for their arrival.

I am so happy ofabout the new catkittens and I will allbe prepare d.

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