May 14, 2020
I have a cat, it is name Liếm. I don’t know where does it come from? It appeared in front of my house one month ago. When I saw it I have a little reluctant because at my country, everybody say that “When Cat come home is poor, Dog come home is rich”. After a minue I decided that I would feed it then I brought some food to the cat. It ate like a horse, It was seem so hungry. Now, I think my decide is right because my cat is so cute. It is always follow me and jump onto me. I would like to see my cat especially when it sleeps.
My cCat.
Title should always be capital.
I have a cat, it his name is Liếm.
I don’t know where does ithe coame from?.
This sentence isn't a question, no need for the question mark.
Liem is a male, so you can call him he.
ItHe appeared in front of my house one month ago.
When I saw it, I havewas a little reluctant because atin my country, everybody says that “When Ca cat comes home, it is poor, D. When a dog comes home, it is rich”.
'Saw' and 'Was'; you're talking about the past.
Also remember your commas.
'It is poor', not 'is poor'.
After a minuete, I decided that I would feed it then. I brought some food to the cat.
No need for 'then'. Also, after 'feed it', start a new sentence.
It ate like a horse, It was; it seemed so hungry.
The past of seem is 'seemed' not 'was seem'.
Remove the comma and put a semi-colon, or a fullstop and end the sentence.
Now, I think my decide ision was right because my cat is so cute.
Was, not is. You're talking about the past.
It is always follows me and jumps onto me.
You can also say 'he' instead of 'it'.
'Follows' and 'Jumps'. You're only talking about one cat, not more. If it was more then you would use 'follow' and 'jump'.
I would like to seewatch my cat, especially when it sleeps.
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Sorry if I seemed harsh! Good luck learning English!!
It appeared found him in front of my house one month ago.
Assuming that your cat is a male-- if it's a female, you'd use "her".
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My cat My Title should always be capital. |
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I have a cat, it is name Liếm. I have a cat, |
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I don’t know where does it come from? I don’t know where This sentence isn't a question, no need for the question mark. Liem is a male, so you can call him he. |
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It appeared in front of my house one month ago. I Assuming that your cat is a male-- if it's a female, you'd use "her".
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When I saw it I have a little reluctant because at my country, everybody say that “When Cat come home is poor, Dog come home is rich”. When I saw it, I 'Saw' and 'Was'; you're talking about the past. Also remember your commas. 'It is poor', not 'is poor'. |
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After a minue I decided that I would feed it then I brought some food to the cat. After a minu No need for 'then'. Also, after 'feed it', start a new sentence. |
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It ate like a horse, It was seem so hungry. It ate like a horse The past of seem is 'seemed' not 'was seem'. Remove the comma and put a semi-colon, or a fullstop and end the sentence. |
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Now, I think my decide is right because my cat is so cute. Now, I think my deci Was, not is. You're talking about the past. |
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It is always follow me and jump onto me. It You can also say 'he' instead of 'it'. 'Follows' and 'Jumps'. You're only talking about one cat, not more. If it was more then you would use 'follow' and 'jump'. |
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I would like to see my cat especially when it sleeps. I |
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