Oct. 7, 2020
My car
Yesterday, I drove my Passat again. It is the first car in my life and stands for many meaningful things. It's been several years since the last time I drove it. Its condition is certainly not as good as it was before. First off, I failed to start the engine two or three times, and when the engine worked, the engine fault light on the dashboard kept lighting. Also, the wiper also didn't work. Even more strangely, there were some gravels in one storage box. The instructions for the car were also lost. In short, it was all a mess. If I have been driving the car, it will definitely not be in this case. Destroyers are always where the creators are. God is fair.
My car
Yesterday, I drove my Passat again.
It iwas the first car in my life and stands for many meaningful thingsI ever bought and has a lot of meaning to me.
It's been several years since the last time I drove it.
Its condition is certainly not as good as it was before.
First off, I failed to start the engine two or three times, and when the engine worked, the engine fault light on the dashboard kept flightckering.
Also, tThe wiper also didn't work.
You don't need to say 'also' twice.
Even more strangely, there were some bits of gravels in one of the storage boxes.
The instructions for the car were also lost.
In short, it was all a mess.
If I haved been driving the car regularly, it willould definitely not be in this casstate.
Destroyers are always where the creators are.
This could be corrected in several ways so I'm not sure what your exact meaning is. Something like "Destruction is always where the creators are" might be better.
God is fair.
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Oct. 7, 2020
Destroyers are always where the creators are.
Several years ago I give this car to my son for driving. Now he begin to drive another car of mine. He never takes care of the car, he is just driving. So I mean he is a destroyer and I am a creator. Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.
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Yesterday, I drove my Passat again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is the first car in my life and stands for many meaningful things. It |
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It's been several years since the last time I drove it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its condition is certainly not as good as it was before. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First off, I failed to start the engine two or three times, and when the engine worked, the engine fault light on the dashboard kept lighting. First off, I failed to start the engine two or three times, and when the engine worked, the engine fault light on the dashboard kept fli |
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Also, the wiper also didn't work.
You don't need to say 'also' twice. |
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Even more strangely, there were some gravels in one storage box. Even more strangely, there were some bits of gravel |
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The instructions for the car were also lost. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In short, it was all a mess. In short, it was |
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If I have been driving the car, it will definitely not be in this case. If I ha |
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Destroyers are always where the creators are. Destroyers are always where the creators are. This could be corrected in several ways so I'm not sure what your exact meaning is. Something like "Destruction is always where the creators are" might be better. |
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God is fair. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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