Oct. 2, 2022
My brother
I have a brother.He is 7 years old.I think he is a cute boy.He has short black hair and two big brown eyes.His eyelashes are long and thick.I like his pretty eyes.He has a small mouth,but he can eats a big hamburger.
He is always naughty，so I often fight with him. Like yesterday,I played computer games.He watched TV.But he thoght watched TV was so boring.So he turned off the TV and computer.“oh my gad!! fuck you!”I shouted loudly.I was so angry!But my brother was so happy."Hahaha!you can't play games！"Then we fight.Right now，he is quite.Because he is sleeping!
Haha！:)
I have a brother.He is 7 years old.I think he is a cute boy.He has short black hair and two big brown eyes.His eyelashes are long and thick.I like his pretty eyes.He has a small mouth,but he can eats a big hamburger.
you added and extra s on "eat"
Like yesterday,I played computer games.He watched TV.But he thought watcheding TV was so boring.So he turned off the TV and computer.“oh my gaod!!
You misspelled "thought". "Watched" should be in the present tense, so it would be " watching"
"Hahaha!you can't play games！"Then we fiought .Right now，he is quitet.Because he is sleeping!
Fight should be past tense because it already happened. Quite should be quiet, they mean different things.
Oct. 4, 2022
Okay! I'm glad you pointed out my mistakes！Than you! :D
My brother
I have a brother.He is 7 years old.I think he is a cute boy.He has short black hair and two big brown eyes.His eyelashes are long and thick.I like his pretty eyes.He has a small mouth,but he can eats a big hamburger.
He is always naughty，so I often fight with him.
Like yesterday,I was playeding computer games.He watcheds watching TV.But he thought watcheding TV was so boring.So he turned off the TV and computer.“oh my gad!!
fuck you!”I shouted loudly.I was so angry!But my brother was so happy.
"Hahaha!you can't play games！"Then we fiought.Right now，he is quitet.Because he is sleeping!
I have a brother. He is 7 years old. I think he is a cute boy. He has short black hair and two big brown eyes. His eyelashes are long and thick. I like his pretty eyes. He has a small mouth, but he can eats a big hamburgers*.
There is always a space after punctuation.
*To talk about things in general you can drop the article:
He likes a specific red car.
He likes all red cars.
He is always naughty，, so I often fight with him.
Like yesterday, I played computer games. He watched TV. But he thought watcheding TV was so boring.S, so he turned off the TV and computer.“o “Oh my gaod!!
fuck you!” I shouted loudly. I was so angry! But my brother was so happy.
"Hahaha!y You can't play games！! "Then we fight. Right now， he is quite.et. Because he is sleeping!
The first letter of a sentence is always capitalized.
Quite means "very". It is quite hot today.
Quiet means "not loud", or "calm". It is a quiet store.
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Oct. 3, 2022
Thank you very much! :)
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I have a brother.He is 7 years old.I think he is a cut boy.He has short black hair and two big brown eyes.His eyelashes are long and thick.I like his pretty eyes.He has a small mouth,but he can eats a big hamburger. |
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Like yesterday,I played computer games.He watched TV.But he thoght watched TV was so boring.So he turned off the TV and computer.“oh my gad!! Like yesterday, I played computer games. He watched TV. But he thought watch Like yesterday,I was play Like yesterday,I played computer games.He watched TV.But he thought watch You misspelled "thought". "Watched" should be in the present tense, so it would be " watching" |
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fuck you!”I shouted loudly.I was so angry!But my brother was so happy. fuck you!” I shouted loudly. I was so angry! But my brother was so happy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"Hahaha!you can't play games！"Then we fight.Right now，he is quite.Because he is sleeping! "Hahaha! The first letter of a sentence is always capitalized. Quite means "very". It is quite hot today. Quiet means "not loud", or "calm". It is a quiet store. "Hahaha!you can't play games！"Then we f "Hahaha!you can't play games！"Then we f Fight should be past tense because it already happened. Quite should be quiet, they mean different things. |
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I have a brother.He is 7 years old.I think he is a cute boy.He has short black hair and two big brown eyes.His eyelashes are long and thick.I like his pretty eyes.He has a small mouth,but he can eats a big hamburger. I have a brother. He is 7 years old. I think he is a cute boy. He has short black hair and two big brown eyes. His eyelashes are long and thick. I like his pretty eyes. He has a small mouth, but he can eat There is always a space after punctuation. *To talk about things in general you can drop the article: He likes a specific red car. He likes all red cars. I have a brother.He is 7 years old.I think he is a cute boy.He has short black hair and two big brown eyes.His eyelashes are long and thick.I like his pretty eyes.He has a small mouth,but he can eat I have a brother.He is 7 years old.I think he is a cute boy.He has short black hair and two big brown eyes.His eyelashes are long and thick.I like his pretty eyes.He has a small mouth,but he can eat you added and extra s on "eat" |
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