Oct. 22, 2025
Hello !
I have one little brother. His name is Maël and he is thirteen. Our relationships is very strange. When we are only together, we are so cute towards each other. But when we are with our parents, he his so ennoying ! But I mean really ! He put all of his time to critisize me to jocke, but everytime it's tiresome ! It's because I'm so happy when he his not here ahahah. So, my relationships with him are, in the majority of the time, bad... no, very bad. But, sometimes, we find commun point, like a film that we liked or activity wich we want to do. In there time it's pleasant.
Goodbye !
My brother
Hello !
I have onea little brother.
His name is Maël and he is thirteen.
Our relationships is very strange.
When we are onlyalone together, we are so cutvery nice towards each other.
But when we are with our parents, he his so eannoying !
But I mean really !
He putspends all of his time to critisize me to jocke, but everytimecising me, joking all the time and it's tiresome !
It's becauseSo, I'm sovery happy when he his not here ahahah.
So, my relationships with him are, in the majority of the time,is on the whole bad... but no,t very bad. or terrible
But, sometimes, we find commun pointthings in common, like a film that we liked or an activity wich we want to do.
InAt therose times it's pleasangreat.
Goodbye !
My bBrother
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Hello !
There are no spaces before question or exclamation marks
I have onea little brother.
His name is Maël and he is thirteen.
Our relationships is very strange.
When we are onlyalone together, we are so cute towards each other.
I might suggest "sweet" instead of "cute" here
But when we are with our parents, he his so eannoying !
But I mean really !
"But" is not used so much for emphasis like "mais" is in French
He putspends all (of) his time to critiscizeing me to jocke, but everytime it' around, but it's always tiresome !
This "of" is optional. When you are kidding someone / being silly, it can be described as "joking around"
IThat's becausewhy I'm so happy when he his not here, ahahah.
For posterity, of course we would not spell out laughter in formal writing, but it's a very normal thing to do in general on the internet
So, my relationships with him are, inis, the majority of the time, bad... no, very bad.
"Most of the time" would be a bit more natural than "the majority of the time"
But, sometimes, we find commun poina shared interest, like a film (that) we liked, or an activity which we want to do.
A "shared interest" would be more natural to say than a "common point"
InDuring therose times, it's pleasant.
Goodbye !
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Great job. Sounds like a typical sibling relationship to me!
Our relationships is very strange.
When we are only together by ourselves, we are so cute towards each other.
But when we are with our parents, he his so eannoying !
He puts all of his time to critiscize me to jocke, but everytime it's tiresome every time!
I'm not sure what you mean by 'to jocke', so I'm not sure how to correct it
It's because I'm so happy when he his not here ahahah.
So, my relationships with him are, inis, the majority of the time, bad... no, very bad.
But, sometimes, we find commun pointthings in common, like a film that we liked or activity which we want to do.
In therose times it's pleasant.
Feedback
Very good writing overall with only a few minor errors! Well done!
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It's because I'm so happy when he his not here ahahah. It's because I'm so happy when he
For posterity, of course we would not spell out laughter in formal writing, but it's a very normal thing to do in general on the internet
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