Jan. 1, 2023
My boy's 50th day.
It's my baby boy's 50th day of birth. My husband and I went to a photo studio to take pictures of my baby to celebrate his growth.
We had worried because my boy's condition was not good the day before. He threw up several times after feeding, which was unusual. However, he pooped in the early in the morning and got back on his normal condition.
The photographer and his assistant were quite professional. They knew how to make the baby look at the camera. It took only 20 minutes to take photos.
It's my baby boy's 50th day of birthlife.
My husband and I went to a photo studio to take pictures of my baby to celebrate his growth.
We had worried because my boy's condition was not good the day beforeyesterday.
He threw up several times after feeding, which was unusual.
However, he pooped in the early in the morning and got back onreturned to his normal condition.
The photographer and his assistant were quite professional.
They knew how to make the baby look at the camera.
It took only 20 minutes to take the photos.
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It's my baby boy's 50th day of birth.
My husband and I went to a photo studio to take pictures of my baby to celebrate his growth.
We had worried because my boy's condition was not good the day before.
He threw up several times after feeding, which was unusual.
However, he pooped in the early in the morning, however, and got back ton his normal conditionusual self.
We avoid using "however" at the beginning of sentences when writing. "His usual self" is a set phrase.
The photographer and his assistant were quite professional.
They knew how to make the baby look at the camera.
It took only 20 minutes to take photos.
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Congratulations on his 50th Day! They're so cute at this age and for long afterwards. Good work!
Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much!!!
My boy's 50th day.
It's the 50th day since my baby boy's 50th day of birth.
My husband and I went to a photo studio to take pictures of my baby to celebrate his growth.
We had worried because my boy's condition was not good [the day before | yesterday].
He threw up several times after feeding, which was unusual.
However, he pooped in the early in the morning and got back ton his normal condition.
The photographer and his assistant were quite professional.
They knew how to make the baby look at the camera.
It took only 20 minutes to take (the) photos.
Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much!!
My boy's 50th day.
It's my baby boy's 50th day of birth.
My husband and I went to a photo studio to take pictures of my baby to celebrate his growth.
We had worried because my boy's condition was not good the day before.
He threw up several times after feeding, which was unusual for him.
However, he pooped in the early in the morning and got back on his normal condition.
For this you can say "in the early morning" or "early in the morning"
The photographer and his assistant were quite professional.
They knew how to make the baby look at the camera.
It took onlyonly took 20 minutes to take photos.
The original sentence still works but having the 'only' come before the 'took' sounds more natural.
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Congratulations on your baby boy's 50th day! I hope he grows to be strong and healthy.
Jan. 1, 2023
Thanks for your correction and blessing!
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