Jan. 13, 2023
My boyfriend got COVID-91.
新年快到了，但我男友確診了。
我們只有止痛藥，所以我必須外出去準備更多的藥品。
我去了附近的藥局，買一些藥然後就回家了。
我希望他可以在過年前康復。
The Lunar New Year is coming, but my boyfriend was positive.
We only had antipyretic so I need to go out to prepare more medicine
I went to a pharmacy near our apartment, bought some medicine then went home.
I hope he can recover before the Lunar New Year.
My boyfriend got COVID-919.
The Lunar New Year is coming, but my boyfriend wastested positive for covid.
We only had antipyretics so I needed to go out to prepareget more medicine.
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We only had antipyretics so I needed to go out to buy more medicine.
I went to a pharmacy near our apartment, bought some medicine and then went home.
I hope he can recover before the Lunar New Year.
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Well written! I wish your boyfriend a speedy recovery.
My boyfriend got COVID-919.
The Lunar New Year is coming, but my boyfriend whas tested positive.
“Positive” on its own, without “tested,” usually means 確定, like “I’m positive it will rain today”（我很確定今天會下雨). Therefore, “my boyfriend was positive” means “我男友確定了”.
We only had antipyretics so I needed to go out to prepare get more medicine.
“Prepare more medicine” sounds like you had to create the medicine yourself.
I went to a pharmacy near our apartment, bought some medicine, then went home.
I hope he can recover before the Lunar New Year.
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I hope he recovers quickly and you stay well, too!
Thank you for including a Chinese version of your journal entry. I enjoyed reading it.
The Lunar New Year is coming, but my boyfriend wais positive with COVID-19.
since your boyfriend still has COVID-19, you want to use the present tense (is) instead of the past tense (was)
We only hadve antipyretic, so I need to go out to prepare more medicine.
since the story is currently going on, be sure to use the present tense instead of the past tense.
I went to a pharmacy near our apartment, bought some medicine, and then went home.
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Your English is great! I understood everything you wanted to say. I just left a couple of grammatical corrections :) Keep studying and good luck with your studies!
Jan. 13, 2023
I'll keep working hard. Thank you. ^^
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My boyfriend got COVID-91. My boyfriend got COVID- My boyfriend got COVID- |
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新年快到了，但我男友確診了。 |
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我們只有止痛藥，所以我必須外出去準備更多的藥品。 |
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我去了附近的藥局，買一些藥然後就回家了。 |
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我希望他可以在過年前康復。 |
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The Lunar New Year is coming, but my boyfriend was positive. The Lunar New Year is coming, but my boyfriend since your boyfriend still has COVID-19, you want to use the present tense (is) instead of the past tense (was) The Lunar New Year is coming, but my boyfriend “Positive” on its own, without “tested,” usually means 確定, like “I’m positive it will rain today”（我很確定今天會下雨). Therefore, “my boyfriend was positive” means “我男友確定了”. The Lunar New Year is coming, but my boyfriend |
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