Sept. 13, 2020
My boss
My boss is eager to take back his money by investing in the stock market. He lost a large sum of money due to the COVID-19 pandemic.
When I came across him on my way home, he advised me not to involve with stock investment because it is likely to be a high risk and waste of time, and feel stress as well.
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be eager to, a large sum of, come across
私の上司は、株式投資で必死にお金を取り戻そうとしている。彼は、パンデミックによって多くのお金を失ったようだ。
帰路で彼に出くわしたときに言っていたのは、株式投資はハイリスクで時間の無駄かつストレスになりやすいから関わるなとのことだった。
When I came across him on my way home, he advised me not to get involved with stock investments because it is likely to be a high risk andthey are a risky prospect, waste of time, and feelcause stress as well.
My boss
My boss is eager to takeearn back his money by investing in the stock market.
I think earn or a word like regain is more natural here.
He lost a large sum of money due to the COVID-19 pandemic.
When I came across him on my way home, he advised me not to involve myself with stock investment because it is likely to be a high risk and a waste of time, and feel stressful as well.
high risk here is an adjective, so you don't need "a". However, waste of time is a noun, so you do need "a".
I've provided a different phrasing than the other correction, but both are correct.
My boss
My boss is eager to take back his money by investing in the stock market.
He lost a large sum of money due to the COVID-19 pandemic.
When I came across him on my way home, he advised me not to get involved with stock investment because it is likely to be a high risk and waste of time, and feel stress as wells because it's a waste of time, stressful, and high risk low reward.
I know one of your keywords are come across, but let me give you some more alternatives:
When I ran/bumped into him on my way home....
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I know that feeling. I lost like $500 investing in tesla/apple, but hopefully it will go back up Q_Q
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My boss is eager to take back his money by investing in the stock market. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My boss is eager to I think earn or a word like regain is more natural here. |
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He lost a large sum of money due to the COVID-19 pandemic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I came across him on my way home, he advised me not to involve with stock investment because it is likely to be a high risk and waste of time, and feel stress as well. When I came across him on my way home, he advised me not to get involved with stock I know one of your keywords are come across, but let me give you some more alternatives: When I ran/bumped into him on my way home.... When I came across him on my way home, he advised me not to involve myself with stock investment because it is likely to be high risk here is an adjective, so you don't need "a". However, waste of time is a noun, so you do need "a". I've provided a different phrasing than the other correction, but both are correct. When I came across him on my way home, he advised me not to get involved with stock investments because |
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