Dec. 30, 2025
I mentioned my blueberry plant several times, but never gave you an image of it.
So, here it is: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/B_xncRWn1Kk
There was something I didn't mention in the video: A week after it came to my apartment, a fruit was ripped. I was so happy when I saw it in the morning, but it disappeared in the evening when I got home.
Then on that weekend, I captured the suspect with one of my cameras-- it was a turtledove.
My Blueberry Plant
I mentioned my blueberry plant several times, but never gave you an image of it.
So, here it is: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/B_xncRWn1Kk
There was something I didn't mention in the video:
A week after {it came toarrived at | I brought it into} my apartment, a fruit wasberry rippened.
“Fruit” isn’t wrong, but “berry” is more natural.
I was so happy when I saw it in the morning, but it had disappeared {in the evening when I got home | by the time I got home in the evening}.
Then, on thate weekend, I captured the suspecculprit with one of my cameras -- it was a turtledove.
I like the suspense of “then, on the weekend.” I changed “that” to “the” because it sounds smoother.
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I enjoyed your video. :-)
A week after it cameI brought it to my apartment, a fruit was ripppicked.
"Brought it" sounds better because you were the one who brought there, the plant didn't come by itself
Ripped is usually used when you talk about something being destroyed, however your plant's fruit was just taken. "Picked" is the usual verb when we talk about removing food from plants
I was so happy when I saw it in the morning, but it had disappeared in the evening when I got home.
Then on, that weekend, I captured the suspecculprit with one of my cameras-- it was a turtledove.
"Suspect" is who you think might have done a crime
If you are sure of the person, then this criminal is the "culprit."
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Well done! I love your way of expression and your story!! I watched your video and your pronunciation's great :) I hope your plant grows well and grows lot of fruit!!
My Blueberry Plant
So, here it is: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/B_xncRWn1Kk
There was something I didn't mention in the video:
A week after it came to my apartmentarrived, aI fruit was rippedound a ripe blueberry.
You can also say "a fruit was ripened", but it sounds a bit longer and more awkward.
I was so happy when I saw it in the morning, but it disappeared in the evening when I got home.
Then on that weekend, I captured the suspect with one of my cameras-- it was a turtledove.
"Then on that weekend" is grammatically fine but sounds a little clunky - "that weekend" is more natural and concise.
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Great job, this was excellent and your video is great! 加油!
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