Dec. 17, 2021
School started in September, at the end of summer. It finished in June, in the early summer. It was really hot and the sun was warmly shining. School mostly start and finish on same date. There weren’t a lot of interesting things last year, but I got closer to my classmates. I had Math, English, Croatian, PE, Art, Sience, History… I usually had six or seven lessons. I didn't have favourite subjects because I liked all. I felt great and excited whole year. My summer break was also great. I met new friends and had fun. I was also on the island of Pag!
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School started in September, atround the end of summer.
Sounds more accurate/natural for September to say "around the end of summer".
It finishedended back in June, in the early summer.
This sounds a bit more natural, but nothing wrong with what you wrote.
It was really hot and the sun was warmly shining warmly.
School mostly starts and finishes on same date.
There weren’t a lot of interesting things which happened last year, but I got closer to my classmates.
"Not many interesting things happened last year" might sound more natural, but this is fine too.
I had Math, English, Croatian, PE, Art, Science, and History…. I usually had six or seven lessons.
I didn't havechoose any favourite subjects because I liked them all.
Just saying "I didn't have any favourite subjects" is also fine.
I felt great and was excited whole year.
While your sentence wasn't grammatically wrong, it sounded a bit unnatural.
My summer break was also great.
I met new friends and had fun.
I was also on the island of Pag!
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Overall, rather well-written, with only some grammar mistakes. Well done :)
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School started in September, at the end of the summer.
It finished (or it ended) in June, in the early summer.
It was really hot and the sun was warmly and shining. (and the warm sun was shining)
School mostusually starts and finishes on same date.
I didn't have favourite subjects because I liked them all.
I felt great and excited the whole year.
My summer break was also great.
I met new friends and had fun.
I was also on the island of Pag!
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whats the island of Pag? :0
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School started in September, at the end of summer. School started in September, at the end of the summer. School started in September, a Sounds more accurate/natural for September to say "around the end of summer". |
It finished in June, in the early summer. It finished (or it ended) in June, in the early summer. It This sounds a bit more natural, but nothing wrong with what you wrote. |
It was really hot and the sun was warmly shining. It was really hot and the sun was warm It was really hot and the sun was |
School mostly start and finish on same date. School School mostly starts and finishes on same date. |
There weren’t a lot of interesting things last year, but I got closer to my classmates. There weren’t a lot of interesting things which happened last year, but I got closer to my classmates. "Not many interesting things happened last year" might sound more natural, but this is fine too. |
I had Math, English, Croatian, PE, Art, Sience, History… I usually had six or seven lessons. I had Math, English, Croatian, PE, Art, |
I didn't have favourite subjects because I liked all. I didn't have favourite subject I didn't Just saying "I didn't have any favourite subjects" is also fine. |
I felt great and excited whole year. I felt great and excited the whole year. I felt great and was excited whole year. While your sentence wasn't grammatically wrong, it sounded a bit unnatural. |
My summer break was also great. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I met new friends and had fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I was also on the island of Pag! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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