i My name is Ismail and I'm from sSomalia,. I'm currently living in Mogadishu, working. I asm self -employed, and iI came here to improve my English writing skills.

So thereforeIt would be (much) appreciated if any one can check mythe construction of these smallhort sentences and give me a feedback it would be so appreciated.

much appreciated isn't really proper English, but its very common for expressing appreciation.

my biographyAbout me

biography = like a book about yourself

iI am iIsmail from sSomalia, currently living in Mogadishu, working as. I'm self employed, and iI came here to improve my English writing skills.

how do you have internet? im curious lol

So therefore iIf any one can check my constructionthe grammar of these smallhort sentences and give me a feedback itI would be sogreatly appreciated it.

therefore = formal
construction = this is technically correct but its more natural to say grammar
a feedback = 1 feedback? no its multiple (just feedback)
"it would be so appreciated"? youre not a robot so it would be "I"

Best regardsRegards, Ismail.

or Best regards, Ismail.
also this is more common in letters, but this isnt a letter so

mMy bBiography

i am iIsmail from sSomalia, c. Currently, I'm living in Mogadishu, working and asm self -employed, and i. I came here to improve my English writing skills.

So therefore iIf any one can check my construction of these small sentences and give me a feedback it, I would be sogreatly appreciated it.

I shortened this sentence to make it more concise while maintaining its original meaning.

iI am iIsmail from sSomalia, currently living in Mogadishu, working as self -employed, and iI came here to improve my English writing skills.

So, therefore, if any one can check my construction of these small sentences and give me a feedback, it would be so appreciated.

"So" or "therefore" can also be omitted for less redundancy

my biography

We usually capitalize titles: My Biography

iI am iIsmail from sSomalia, currently living in Mogadishu, working as self -employed, and i caI’ve come me here to improve my English writing skills.

So, therefore, if any one can check my (or: the) construction of these small sentences and give me a feedback it would be so appreciated.