Oct. 18, 2022
My biography
Hello, I wish you a beautiful day, I'm from Mexico, and you can call me Li.
I started to learn english by myself since I was in high school because I wanted to read comics.
After that I became a book lover and most of my favourite books are in english (my favourite topics are how brain works and learning techniques)
I fell in love with languages and now I'm studying japanese,
I hope I can help you with anything, correcting you in spanish for example, or writing texts that gives you something useful for your daily life
let's do our best!.
I have a doubt; ¿does "I wish you a beautiful day" sound natural? I don't know if "have a nice day" sonds like an order.
Correction Settings
Hello,! I wish you a beautiful day,. I'm from Mexico, and you can call me Li.
Hello! I wish you a beautiful day. I'm from Mexico, and you can call me Li.
This isn't incorrect, but it's a little smoother when they are separate sentences.
I started to learn eEnglish by myself sincewhen I was in high school because I wanted to read comics.
I started to learn English by myself when I was in high school because I wanted to read comics.
After that I became a book lover and most of my favourite books are in eEnglish (my favourite topics are how brain works and learning techniques)
After that I became a book lover and most of my favourite books are in English (my favourite topics are how brain works and learning techniques)
I fell in love with languages and now I'm studying jJapanese,
I fell in love with languages and now I'm studying Japanese,
I hope I can help you with anything, correcting you in sSpanish for example, or writing texts that gives you something useful for your daily life
I hope I can help you with anything, correcting you in Spanish for example, or writing texts that gives you something useful for your daily life
lLet's do our best!.
Let's do our best!
Feedback
Like the other corrector said, languages are capitalized. This is really good though! ("I wish you a beautiful day" might seem a little formal, but it is also very sweet. I think it works! "Have a nice day" does not seem like a command to native speakers. :) )
Oct. 18, 2022
¡Thank you so much! you'd solved a lot of my doubts, thank you again, it really means a lot for me.
I started to learn eing English by myself sincewhen I was in high school, because I wanted to read comics.
I started learning English by myself when I was in high school, because I wanted to read comics.
After that, I became a book lover and most of my favourite books are in eEnglish (my favourite topics are howinclude: how the brain works and learning techniques).
After that, I became a book lover and most of my favourite books are in English (my favourite topics include: how the brain works and learning techniques).
I fell in love with languages and now I'm studying jJapanese,
I fell in love with languages and now I'm studying Japanese,
I hope I can help you with anything, correcting you in sSpanish for example, or writing texts that gives you something useful knowledge for your daily life.
I hope I can help you with anything, correcting you in Spanish for example, or writing texts that gives you some useful knowledge for your daily life.
lLet's do our best!.
Let's do our best!
Feedback
Great job! I have just picked up on a few small things but otherwise your writing is very clear and fluent. Be aware that names of languages are always capitalised ("English", "Japanese", "Spanish" etc.), and look out for some small punctuation errors :)
Oct. 18, 2022
¡Thank you so much! you're so kind, It means a lot for me, I'll use it to improve.
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My biography |
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Hello, I wish you a beautiful day, I'm from Mexico, and you can call me Li.
Hello This isn't incorrect, but it's a little smoother when they are separate sentences. |
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I started to learn english by myself since I was in high school because I wanted to read comics.
I started
I started to learn |
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After that I became a book lover and most of my favourite books are in english (my favourite topics are how brain works and learning techniques)
After that, I became a book lover and most of my favourite books are in
After that I became a book lover and most of my favourite books are in |
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I fell in love with languages and now I'm studying japanese,
I fell in love with languages and now I'm studying
I fell in love with languages and now I'm studying |
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I hope I can help you with anything, correcting you in spanish for example, or writing texts that gives you something useful for your daily life
I hope I can help you with anything, correcting you in
I hope I can help you with anything, correcting you in |
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let's do our best!.
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