May 13, 2020
My Bio
Hi, I am Korean. I spent 14 months in total in the UK and the US for work. I need to write in English. I want to speak fluently in the language for ease of communication, although I am far from fluent now.
I once learned Japanese at a basic level. Although the learning process is now halted, I want to restart to do because Japan is geographically quite close to my own country and pleasant to travel. And the language is, thankfully, rather similar to my mother tongue.
I spent a total of 14 months in total in the UK and the US for work.
"in total in the UK and the US for work" can sound a bit repetitive
Although the learning process is now haltedI stopped learning, I want to restart to do because Japan is geographically quite close to my own country and pleasant to travel to.
The first clause is in passive tense and it can sound a bit weird to an English speaker.
And tThe language is also, thankfully, rather similar to my mother tongue.
Feedback
Good job on your text! You write really well!
May 13, 2020
I have learned a lot from you. Your comment is quite encouraging!
My Bio
Hi, I am Korean.
I spent 14 months in total in the UK and the US for work.
I need to write in English.
I want to speak fluently in the language for ease of communication, although I am far from fluent now.
I once learned Japanese at a basic level.
Although the learning process is now haltI've stopped, I want to restart to dolearning again because Japan is geographically quite close to my own country and pleasant to travel to.
More natural phrasing
Andlso, the language is, thankfully, rather similar to my mother tongue.
Starting a sentence with "and" is actually fine but I tend to prefer other connectives
Feedback
Nice job! To progress I'd suggest trying to improve the flow of your writing by using more connectives to link related sentences together :)
May 13, 2020
Great comments. Thank you!
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I spent 14 months in total in the UK and the US for work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I spent a total of 14 months in "in total in the UK and the US for work" can sound a bit repetitive |
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I need to write in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to speak fluently in the language for ease of communication, although I am far from fluent now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I once learned Japanese at a basic level. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although the learning process is now halted, I want to restart to do because Japan is geographically quite close to my own country and pleasant to travel. Although More natural phrasing Although The first clause is in passive tense and it can sound a bit weird to an English speaker. |
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And the language is, thankfully, rather similar to my mother tongue. A Starting a sentence with "and" is actually fine but I tend to prefer other connectives
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