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I'm going to share my holiday experience. Normally I spend my holiday being abroad. I have gone abroad three times: the first two of them I have been to Turkey, the third one - to Cyprus. The most interesting trip was the third one because it was the first my own trip. I had never travelled on my own before that moment. I landed in Larnaka and stayed in a hotel near Ayia Napa. My holiday lasted 9 days. I spent my holiday swimming in the sea, sunbathing on the beach and eating national cuisine. Also I explored the island a lot. I visited both the North and the South parts of the island. We got from one part to another by bus listening to the history of Cyprus and its cultural features. On my way I saw lots of attractions. I fascinated with the remains of medival fortresses and cathedrals that were left by crusaders. I hope I'll come back there once to enjoy the local cultural, nature and food and explore the island more detail
Normally I spend my holiday being abroad.
"abroad" works as a location so you don't need "being" here and it's more natural to omit it.
I have gone abroad three times: the first two of them I have betimes I went to Turkey, the third one -time I went to Cyprus.
The most interesting trip was the third one because it was the first trip (by myself / on my own trip).
I was fascinated with the remains of medieval fortresses and cathedrals that were left by crusaders.
I hope I'll come back there onceagain to enjoy the local culturale, nature and food and explore the island more detail
"cultural" is an adjective but there's nothing which its being applied to so swapped it out for the noun "culture"
My best holiday experience |
I'm going to share my holiday experience. |
Normally I spend my holiday being abroad. Normally I spend my holiday "abroad" works as a location so you don't need "being" here and it's more natural to omit it. |
I have gone abroad three times: the first two of them I have been to Turkey, the third one - to Cyprus. I have gone abroad three times: the first two |
The most interesting trip was the third one because it was the first my own trip. The most interesting trip was the third one because it was the first trip (by myself / on my own |
I had never travelled on my own before that moment. |
I landed in Larnaka and stayed in a hotel near Ayia Napa. |
My holiday lasted 9 days. |
I spent my holiday swimming in the sea, sunbathing on the beach and eating national cuisine. |
Also I explored the island a lot. |
I visited both the North and the South parts of the island. |
We got from one part to another by bus listening to the history of Cyprus and its cultural features. |
On my way I saw lots of attractions. |
I fascinated with the remains of medival fortresses and cathedrals that were left by crusaders. I was fascinated with the remains of medieval fortresses and cathedrals that were left by crusaders. |
I hope I'll come back there once to enjoy the local cultural, nature and food and explore the island more detail I hope I'll come back there "cultural" is an adjective but there's nothing which its being applied to so swapped it out for the noun "culture" |
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