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Ksenia222

July 18, 2025

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My best friend

My best friend name is Nastya. I met with her 8 years ago. We often quarreled, then made up, but now we are doing well. Our friendship is real and comfortable. Every day we go to outside and talk about everything on the world. We are happy together. Her family really like me. Nastya likes to dance, draw and watch tiktok. She is so kind and helpful person!

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My best friend's name is Nastya.

Another way you can word this is "my best friend is called Nastya" which might sound more natural

I met with her 8 years ago.

We often quarrelled, and then made up, but now we are doing well.

Our friendship is realtrue and comfortable.

Every day, we go to outside and talk about everything ogoing on in the world.

Her family really like me.

Nastya likes to dance, draw and watch tTiktTok.

She is so kind and such a helpful person!

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Awesome job! Your English is really great. I'm not sure what you meant with "our friendship is real" so I changed it to true although this sounds weird as well. Other than that, great job :)

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Ksenia222

July 19, 2025

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Thanks for your help!

My best friend


Nastya likes to dance, draw and watch tiktok.


Nastya likes to dance, draw and watch tTiktTok.

She is so kind and helpful person!


She is so kind and such a helpful person!

Her family really like me.


Her family really like me.

My best friend name is Nastya.


My best friend's name is Nastya.

Another way you can word this is "my best friend is called Nastya" which might sound more natural

I met with her 8 years ago.


I met with her 8 years ago.

We often quarreled, then made up, but now we are doing well.


We often quarrelled, and then made up, but now we are doing well.

Our friendship is real and comfortable.


Our friendship is realtrue and comfortable.

Every day we go to outside and talk about everything on the world.


Every day, we go to outside and talk about everything ogoing on in the world.

We are happy together.


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