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My best day

Hi my friends.
Today I'm excited because I finish my work week which go since sunday to friday.
Tomorrow will be my free day and tonight I'm going to do my daily work out, and after that I'll take out a little party.
I usually drink some beers and watch music videos on friday nights.
Sometimes my wife stay with me, other times I stay alone but on the same way I enjoy it.
I think that cold beer and music are a fantastic combination and I enjoy it better in my home because I hate public transport and I lazzy to go out, also in my house I choose what kind of music listening.
Please don't take me a wrong, I'm a nice person, but certain pleasures taste better alone.
I will go back on sunday.
Thanks everybody.


Mi mejor dia
Hola amigos.
Hoy estoy emocionado porque termine mi semana laboral la cual va desde el domingo hasta el viernes.
Mañana sera mi dia libre y esta noche ire a hacer mis ejercicios habituales y despues de eso organizare una pequeña fiesta.
Yo acostumbro a beber algunas cervezas y ver videos musicales los viernes en la noche.
A veces me acompaña mi esposa, otras veces me quedo solo pero de igual manera lo disfruto.
Yo creo que la cerveza fria y la musica son una fantastica combinacion y lo disfruto mejor en mi casa porque odio el transporte publico y soy perezoso para salir, ademas en mi casa yo elijo que tipo de musica escuchar.
por favor no me malentiendan, yo soy una persona agradable, pero ciertos placeres saben mejor solo.
Volveré el domingo.
Gracias a todos.

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My best day

Hi my friends.

Today I'm excited because I finish my work week which go since ses from Sunday to fFriday.

Tomorrow will be my free day and tonight I'm going to do my daily work out, and after that I'll take out a little party.

I usually drink some beers and watch music videos on friday nights.

Sometimes my wife stay with me, other times I stay alone but onat the same waytime I enjoy it.

I think you meant to say you still enjoy it

I think that cold beer and music are a fantastic combination and I enjoy it better in my home because I hate public transport and I am lazzy to go out, also inat my house I choose what kind of music I listening.

Please don't take me a wrong, I'm a nice person, but certain pleasures taste better alone.

I will go back on sSunday.

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My best day


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I usually drink some beers and watch music videos on friday nights.


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Sometimes my wife stay with me, other times I stay alone but on the same way I enjoy it.


Sometimes my wife stay with me, other times I stay alone but onat the same waytime I enjoy it.

I think you meant to say you still enjoy it

I think that cold beer and music are a fantastic combination and I enjoy it better in my home because I hate public transport and I lazzy to go out, also in my house I choose what kind of music listening.


I think that cold beer and music are a fantastic combination and I enjoy it better in my home because I hate public transport and I am lazzy to go out, also inat my house I choose what kind of music I listening.

Please don't take me a wrong, I'm a nice person, but certain pleasures taste better alone.


Please don't take me a wrong, I'm a nice person, but certain pleasures taste better alone.

I will go back on sunday.


I will go back on sSunday.

Thanks everybody.


Hi my friends.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I'm excited because I finish my work week which go since sunday to friday.


Today I'm excited because I finish my work week which go since ses from Sunday to fFriday.

Tomorrow will be my free day and tonight I'm going to do my daily work out, and after that I'll take out a little party.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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