Sept. 5, 2022
My bedroom
My bedroom is fairly small and its present in the corner of my house.
As its very small, it was very difficult for me to arrange all of my furniture in it.
Once you enter my room, on the right you'll see my study desk. It has two drawers and a cabinets. The table is kind of cluttered and I've put so many unecessary things on top it.
Just on the right of my desk, my cupboard is present. Its a typical two door cupboard and its fitted in a rectangular hole present in my room. This hole is due to the renovation of my bathroom wall.
In front of my cupboard is a mirror. Its rectangular, full sized mirror onto which fairy lights have been attached.
My bed is a single bed which occupies the corner of my room. Other than these furniture items, theres a random chair in my room which is full of my clothes.
My bedroom
My bedroom is fairly small and its present in the corner of my house.
As its very small, it was very difficult for me to arrange all of my furniture in it.
Once you enter my room, on the right you'll see my (study) desk.
It has two drawers and a cabinets.
The table is kind of cluttered andbecause I've put so many unecessary things on top it.
Just oOn the right of my desk, there is my cupboard is present.
Its a typical two door cupboard and its fitted in a rectangular hole present in my room.
This hole is due to the renovation of my bathroom wall.
In front of my cupboard is a mirror.
Its a rectangular, full sized mirror onto which fairy lights have been attached/hung.
My bed is a single bed which occupies the corner of my room.
Other than these items of furniture items, there's a random chair in my room which is full ofcovered in my clothes.
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Great writing! We don't usually use "present" to say there is something when describing at area :)
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My bedroom This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My bedroom is fairly small and its present in the corner of my house. My bedroom is fairly small and its |
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As its very small, it was very difficult for me to arrange all of my furniture in it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Once you enter my room, on the right you'll see my study desk. Once you enter my room, on the right you'll see my (study) desk. |
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It has two drawers and a cabinets. It has two drawers and a cabinet |
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The table is kind of cluttered and I've put so many unecessary things on top it. The table is kind of cluttered |
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Just on the right of my desk, my cupboard is present.
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Its a typical two door cupboard and its fitted in a rectangular hole present in my room. Its a typical two door cupboard and its fitted in a rectangular hole |
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This hole is due to the renovation of my bathroom wall. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In front of my cupboard is a mirror. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its rectangular, full sized mirror onto which fairy lights have been attached. Its a rectangular, full sized mirror on |
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My bed is a single bed which occupies the corner of my room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Other than these furniture items, theres a random chair in my room which is full of my clothes. Other than these items of furniture |
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