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June 27, 2025

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My Animal Sanctuary

Hello, good evening!

If I win a lot of money, I won't donate to anybody. Because money makes people corrupt. So, I will create my own animal sanctuary, it will be like a spa for animals without a home. I will like to help them, because they don't have the ability to win their own money.

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My Animal Sanctuary

Hello, good evening!

If I wion a lot of money, I wouldn't donate (it) to anybody.

Because money makes people corrupt.

So, I willould create my own animal sanctuary, it will. It would be like a spa for animals without a home.

I willould like to help them, because they don't have the ability to winmake their own money.

My Animal Sanctuary

Hello, good evening!

If I wion a lot of money, I wouldn't donate ito anybody.

This is a hypothetical situation => If I won, I would/wouldn't

I changed the end because "anybody" signifies any PERSON. But we don't typically use the word "donate" when it's in regards to giving money to people. We donate to organizations, groups, charities, etc. If it were in terms of whether or not to give money to people, we would tend to use "give" in place of "donate."

E.g., I wouldn't donate to any organizations. I wouldn't give any money to anybody.

Because money makes people corrupt.

So, I willould create my own animal sanctuary, it willould be like a spa for animals without a home.

"Would" because it's hypothetical. "Will" would be that you have literally already won the lottery and these are your concrete plans.

I willould like to help them, because theyanimals don't have the ability to winmake their own money.

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If I win a lot of money, I won't donate to anybody.


If I wion a lot of money, I wouldn't donate ito anybody.

This is a hypothetical situation => If I won, I would/wouldn't I changed the end because "anybody" signifies any PERSON. But we don't typically use the word "donate" when it's in regards to giving money to people. We donate to organizations, groups, charities, etc. If it were in terms of whether or not to give money to people, we would tend to use "give" in place of "donate." E.g., I wouldn't donate to any organizations. I wouldn't give any money to anybody.

If I wion a lot of money, I wouldn't donate (it) to anybody.

Because money makes people corrupt.


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So, I will create my own animal sanctuary, it will be like a spa for animals without a home.


So, I willould create my own animal sanctuary, it willould be like a spa for animals without a home.

"Would" because it's hypothetical. "Will" would be that you have literally already won the lottery and these are your concrete plans.

So, I willould create my own animal sanctuary, it will. It would be like a spa for animals without a home.

I will like to help them, because they don't have the ability to win their own money.


I willould like to help them, because theyanimals don't have the ability to winmake their own money.

I willould like to help them, because they don't have the ability to winmake their own money.

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