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asahan2013

Dec. 2, 2025

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My Alma Mater

I graduated from Chang Jung Christian University.
Its historical roots can be traced back to 1865 AD.
I was graduated from my alma mater so long ago, but still had memories about my alma mater.
Alma mater is a college or university you graduated from.
When I was a student, I usually got up at six and went to the top of the building.
When I learn a foreign language, I read out loud.
The essence of language learning is repetition.


我毕业於長榮基督教大学。
它的历史根源,可以上溯至公元1865年。
我离开母校多年,但仍对母校留有诸多回忆。
母校是指你毕业的学院或大学。
学生时代,通常六点起床,走到大楼顶层。
当我学外语,就大声朗读。
语言学习的精髓就是反复练习。

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My Alma Mater

I graduated from Chang Jung Christian University.

Its historical roots can be traced back to 1865 AD.

I was graduated from my alma mater so long ago, but still had memories about my alma mater.

I graduated from my alma mater so long ago, but I still have memories of it.

No need for "was" here.

"Had" implies something you no longer have, eg. in this case it would mean you forgot these memories. If you still have something from the past, you can just say "I still have".

This is more of a flow correction, but you can just use "it" when referring to something you already mentioned in that same sentence, to prevent too much repetition.

Alma mater is a college or university you graduated from.

When I was a student, I usually got up at six and went to the top of the building.

You could add "every day" or "every morning" to the end of this sentence to add clarity.

When I learn a foreign language, I read out loud.

The essence of language learning is repetition.

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My Alma Mater


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I graduated from Chang Jung Christian University.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Its historical roots, can be traced back to 1865 AD.


I was graduated from my alma mater so long, but still had memories about my alma mater.


Alma mater is a college or university you graduated from.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was a student, I usually got up at six and went to the top of the building.


When I was a student, I usually got up at six and went to the top of the building.

You could add "every day" or "every morning" to the end of this sentence to add clarity.

When I learn a foreign language, I read out loud.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The essence of language learning is repetition.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Its historical roots can be traced back to 1865 AD.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was graduated from my alma mater so long ago, but still had memories about my alma mater.


I was graduated from my alma mater so long ago, but still had memories about my alma mater.

I graduated from my alma mater so long ago, but I still have memories of it. No need for "was" here. "Had" implies something you no longer have, eg. in this case it would mean you forgot these memories. If you still have something from the past, you can just say "I still have". This is more of a flow correction, but you can just use "it" when referring to something you already mentioned in that same sentence, to prevent too much repetition.

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