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My Aching Feet
My feet have been aching from time to time for a long time.But I have no idea when they started like this. The ache will be reduce after I have a good rest or have a hot feet soak; the ache will be increased after I do even some very light exercises. The ache is localized to the heel and the sole. I have seen the doctor many times, but all of these do not work. I feel so frustrated and have no idea what to do.
My feet have been aching from time to time for a long timwhile.
Your sentence was grammatically correct, but it feels more natural to not have "time" three times in one sentence.
But I have no idea when they started like thisto ache.
Because this is a new sentence, it is better to repeat what happened to your feet.
The ache will be reducesubsides after I have a good rest or have a hot feeoot soak; however, the ache will be increased after I do even some veryorsens even after I do light exercises.
"Subsides" is better to use. It means that the ache is still there, but you can't feel it.
No need to repeat "have" twice.
"However" is more natural to have even though your sentence was correct.
The future tense should not be used because you are not making predictions but stating what usually happens.
The ache is localized to the heel and the sole.
Nice vocabulary!
I have seen the doctor many times, but allnone of these do notir advice works.
By "all of these", I am guessing you mean all of the doctors' advice.
I am also guessing that none of their advice works.
I feel sovery frustrated and have no idea what to do.
It is better to use "very" for written English.
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Overall, great job! I notice that you have a great vocabulary and punctuation; only your sentence structure needs a little work, but it will come with time. Also, your ache will get better, don't worry.
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Thanks very much my dear friend! You understood what I wanted to say exactly. I wish my ache will get better soon ^_^
My Aching Feet
My feet have been aching from time to timeon and off for a long time.
Use either "on and off for a long time" or simply "from time to time".
But I have no idea'm not sure when ithey started like this.
"I have no idea" sounds like you're talking about something separate from yourself.
"I'm not sure" or "I don't remember" or "I didn't even notice" would be better.
The ache will be reducepain gets better after I have a good rest or have a hot (warm) feet soak; the ache will be increa, but it gets worsed after I do even some very light exercises.
The ache is localized to thein my heels and the soles.
You wrote "feet" earlier, so I'm guessing you mean both sides.
I have seen the doctors many times, but all of these do not work.they couldn't help.
I'm guessing "all of these" refers to the doctors, so I changed it to the plural "doctors".
I feel so frustrated and have no idea what to do (now/next).
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Get well soon!
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Thanks for your thoughtful and helpful comments!
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I have seen the doctor many times, but all of these do not work. I have seen I'm guessing "all of these" refers to the doctors, so I changed it to the plural "doctors". I have seen the doctor many times, but By "all of these", I am guessing you mean all of the doctors' advice. I am also guessing that none of their advice works. |
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I feel so frustrated and have no idea what to do. I feel so frustrated and have no idea what to do (now/next). I feel It is better to use "very" for written English. |
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My feet have been aching from time to time for a long time. My feet have been aching Use either "on and off for a long time" or simply "from time to time". My feet have been aching from time to time for a Your sentence was grammatically correct, but it feels more natural to not have "time" three times in one sentence. |
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But I have no idea when they started like this. But I "I have no idea" sounds like you're talking about something separate from yourself. "I'm not sure" or "I don't remember" or "I didn't even notice" would be better. But I have no idea when they started Because this is a new sentence, it is better to repeat what happened to your feet. |
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The ache will be reduce after I have a good rest or have a hot feet soak; the ache will be increased after I do even some very light exercises. The The ache "Subsides" is better to use. It means that the ache is still there, but you can't feel it. No need to repeat "have" twice. "However" is more natural to have even though your sentence was correct. The future tense should not be used because you are not making predictions but stating what usually happens. |
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The ache is localized to the heel and the sole. The ache is localized You wrote "feet" earlier, so I'm guessing you mean both sides. The ache is localized to the heel and the sole. Nice vocabulary! |
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