March 31, 2022
Mutton Soup
The most delicious food from my childhood that I still remember today was mutton soup.
Back in that time, living conditions in the countryside were really terrible. I didn’t even have enough food to eat.
My father worked in the local government so he could get a salary every month. Although his salary was just a little (about six to seven dollars a month), my family did have a little money.
Sometimes, my parents bought a little lamb so we could eat mutton soup.
Before my mom made the mutton soup, she washed the mutton first, then boiled it and placed it in a kitchen cabinet. The broth was preserved for later use.
When she made the mutton soup, she sliced a few pieces of the mutton, found some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage, ginger, green onions, a part of the original soup, then put them in the water that was already in the pot and heated them.
The Chinese cabbage and sweet potato vermicelli were the main ingredients of the mutton soup. There wasn’t as much mutton—often times there was not any.
But we still called it mutton soup because the soup that boiled the mutton tasted so good, and we liked that flavor.
This way, we can eat mutton soup many times by buying mutton once.
The most delicious food from my childhood that I still remember to this day wais mutton soup.
April 6, 2022
Thank you very much.
Mutton Soup
The most delicious food from my childhood that I still remember today wais mutton soup.
Back in that timethen, living conditions in the countryside were really terrible.
IWe often didn’t even have enough food to eat.
MSince my father worked infor the local government so, he could getearned a salary every month.
Although his salary was just a littlepretty small (about six tor seven dollars aper month), my family did have a little monewas able to get by.
"Able to get by" means something like "had enough to survive" or "had enough to maintain our lifestyle". Could also say "able to scrape by" to really stress how close it is.
Sometimes, my parents bought a littlsome lamb so we could eat mutton soup.
Before my mom made the mutton soup, she washed the mutton first, then boiled it and placed it in a kitchen cabinet.
The broth was preserved for later use.
When she made the mutton soup, she sliced a few pieces of the mutton, then found some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage, ginger, green onions, a part ofnd some broth from the original soup, then put themplacing everything in the water that was already in the pot andto be heated them.
The Chinese cabbage and sweet potato vermicelli were the main ingredients of the mutton soup.
There wasn’t as much mutton— as you'd expect—in fact often times there was non't any.
But we still called it mutton soup because the soup that boiled the mutton tasted so good, and we liked that flavor.
This way, we canUsing this method, we were able to eat mutton soup many times by buying mutton once.
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All of your sentences were perfectly understandable, I just tried to make them sound a bit more natural. Great work!
April 1, 2022
Thank you very much.
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Mutton Soup This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The most delicious food when I was a kid that I still remember today was mutton soup. |
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Back in that time, living conditions in the countryside were really terrible. Back |
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I couldn't even have enough food to eat. |
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My father worked in the local government so he could get a salary every month.
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Although his salary was just a little (about six to seven dollars), my family did have a little money. |
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Sometimes, my parents bought a little mutton so we could eat mutton soup. |
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Before my mom made mutton soup, she washed the mutton first, then boiled it and placed it in a kitchen cabinet. |
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The soup was preserved for use later. |
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When she made the mutton soup, she sliced a few pieces of the mutton, found some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage, ginger and green onions, then put them in the soup and heated them. |
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The Chinese cabbage and the sweet potato vermicelli were the main foodstuffs in the mutton soup. |
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There was only fewer mutton, often times there was no any. |
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But we still call it mutton soup because the soup that boiled the mutton tasted so good, we like that flavor. |
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But we still called it mutton soup because the soup that boiled the mutton tasted so good, and we liked that flavor. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The most delicious food from my childhood that I still remember today was mutton soup. The most delicious food from my childhood that I still remember today The most delicious food from my childhood that I still remember to this day |
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I didn’t even have enough food to eat.
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Although his salary was just a little (about six to seven dollars a month), my family did have a little money. Although his salary was "Able to get by" means something like "had enough to survive" or "had enough to maintain our lifestyle". Could also say "able to scrape by" to really stress how close it is. |
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Sometimes, my parents bought a little lamb so we could eat mutton soup. Sometimes, my parents bought |
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Before my mom made the mutton soup, she washed the mutton first, then boiled it and placed it in a kitchen cabinet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The broth was preserved for later use. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When she made the mutton soup, she sliced a few pieces of the mutton, found some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage, ginger, green onions, a part of the original soup, then put them in the water that was already in the pot and heated them. When she made the mutton soup, she sliced a few pieces of the mutton, then found some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage, ginger, green onions |
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The Chinese cabbage and sweet potato vermicelli were the main ingredients of the mutton soup. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There wasn’t as much mutton—often times there was not any. There wasn’t as much mutton |
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This way, we can eat mutton soup many times by buying mutton once.
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