alexwong2164's avatar
alexwong2164

Feb. 6, 2021

0
Must prepare a new life

How long since the virus affect our life?

9 months? 1 years…

Not only the world’s economic is being impact our life too.

But I think I am in the luck group.

Because last year I joined a company has not been affected by the virus.

While most of my friends suffer job lost, salary reduction…

I also got a part time, which allows me working in all my holiday.

So, up to now I just working, working and working.

In fact, besides working nothing else we can do.

All facilities are shout down, can’t visit other country…

I definitely need a life style after this pandemic.

I am talking about early retirement and live in somewhere I like such as Japan.

Corrections

Must prepare a new life

How long since the virus has affected our life?

9 months?

1 years?

Not only the world’s economicy is being impacted but our lifeves too.

But I think I am in'm one of the luck group.y ones.

While most of my friends suffered job lost,s or salary reduction.

I also got a part time job, which allows me to working in all during my holiday.

So, up tountil now I justhave just ben working, working and working.

In fact, besides workingBesides there is nothing else we can do.

All facilities are shout down, and we can’t visit other country…ies.

I definitely need a life style after this pandemic.

Not sure what you mean here, but my suggestion is:

I hope our life styles can change after this pandemic because I definitely want to change mine.

I am talking about early retirement and live ing somewhere I like such as Japan.

Feedback

Nice and I agree, I hope the Covid crisis starts to subside soon and that we can all get back to our lives. Keep up the good writing!

Must prepare a new life


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

How long since the virus affect our life?


How long since the virus has affected our life?

9 months?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

1 years…


1 years?

Not only the world’s economic is being impact our life too.


Not only the world’s economicy is being impacted but our lifeves too.

But I think I am in the luck group.


But I think I am in'm one of the luck group.y ones.

Because last year I joined a company has not been affected by the virus.


While most of my friends suffer job lost, salary reduction…


While most of my friends suffered job lost,s or salary reduction.

I also got a part time, which allows me working in all my holiday.


I also got a part time job, which allows me to working in all during my holiday.

So, up to now I just working, working and working.


So, up tountil now I justhave just ben working, working and working.

In fact, besides working nothing else we can do.


In fact, besides workingBesides there is nothing else we can do.

All facilities are shout down, can’t visit other country…


All facilities are shout down, and we can’t visit other country…ies.

I definitely need a life style after this pandemic.


I definitely need a life style after this pandemic.

Not sure what you mean here, but my suggestion is: I hope our life styles can change after this pandemic because I definitely want to change mine.

I am talking about early retirement and live in somewhere I like such as Japan.


I am talking about early retirement and live ing somewhere I like such as Japan.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium