Feb. 5, 2020
Music Heals Me
Today I got a bit irritated for no reason before I went to bed.
I tried several things to relax - playing games, looking at some funny things on the internet and listening to the music.
I noticed that I could hear the music instruments clearly through my earphones and that made me relaxed the most!
I’m feeling good now.
I hope everyone has a great day/night! :)
(Corrected on Feb. 6th)
【音楽は私を癒してくれる】
今日、寝る前に理由もなく少しいらだってしまいました。
リラックスしようと、いくつかのことを試してみました。ゲームをしたり、面白いものをネットで見たり、音楽を聴いたり。
私は、イヤホンを通すと演奏がはっきり聞こえることに気付き、それは私が一番リラックスできたことでした！
今は、気分がいいです。
みなさん、よい一日/夜をお過ごしください! :)
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I tried todoing several things to relax.
I was playing game, looking at some funny things on the net, and listening to the music.
I’m feeling good now.¶
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I'm feeling better now.
I noticed that I canould hear the music instrument clearly through my earphones.
since you are talking about the past, you should use "could" instead of present tense "can"
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It was the most relaxing!¶
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It helped me to relax the mobest!
I hope everyone has a great day/night!
:)
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Yes, music is so amazing. Whenever I feel sad or upset or frustrated, choosing the right song really helps to calm me down. It's really cool. And I'm glad it helped you to feel better. :)
Another awesome entry, thanks Kyoko-san!
Feb. 6, 2020
Thank you for the correction, Xeta-Chan!
I’m happy to know you also listen to the music when you’re sad too! :)
I always listen to random songs by US top 100.
There are many great songs!
ありがとう☺️✨
Feb. 15, 2020
I'm always happy to help!
Yes, it's really great to lift me when I'm feeling down.
Oh, that's really cool! I love listening to Japanese music, especially from anime. I love the sound of Japanese. x)
どういたしまして！
Music Heals Me
Today I got a bit irritated withfor no reason before I went to bed.
"a little irritated" is also okay.
I tried to several things to relax.
"I tried doing several things to relax." is also okay.
I was playinged games, lookinged at some funny things on the net, and listening to theed to music.
"net → internet" is also okay.
For me, I would combine it with the previous sentence:
"I tried several things to relax - playing games, looking at funny things on the internet and listening to music."
I’m feeling good now.
I noticed that I canould hear the music instruments clearly through my earphones.
IThat made me relaxed the most!
You can consider combining it with the previous sentence,
"... my earphones and that made me relaxed the most!"
I hope everyone has a great day/night!
:)
Feedback
well written! have a good night :)
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I was playing game, looking at some funny things on the net, and listening to the music. I "net → internet" is also okay. For me, I would combine it with the previous sentence: "I tried several things to relax - playing games, looking at funny things on the internet and listening to music." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It made me relaxed the most!
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I’m feeling good now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I’m feeling good now.¶ |
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Today I got a bit irritated for no reason before I went to bed. |
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I tried several things to relax - playing games, looking at some funny things on the internet and listening to the music. |
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I noticed that I could hear the music instruments clearly through my earphones and that made me relaxed the most! |
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(Corrected on Feb, 6th) |
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