April 22, 2023
Music festival at "Morón"
Music festival at "Morón"
Reasons for a local music festival
Our village is not particularly the typical destination for tourists to choose, even for andalusian people. There is nothing notable, specially for youth, beyond some areas to practice climbing and the historical centre. Therefore, an interesting way to put end to this situation would be creating a music festival. In regards to the costs associated to such an important event, it should be stated that these are mostly covered by the company publically elected to be in charge of it, and remaining costs will be derived from statal public funds for culture.
Possible place and music events
According to the place, the best option, by far, is the empty fields in the outskirts next to the motorway, since citizens would not be affected for noise and related problems (as it is stated below in this proposal) and the public would not get lost.
Because of the enormous space for the event to take place, the best option to gather as much and diverse public as possible would be settling four stages for different kind of music: rock, electronic, reggaeton and rap. These are the most demanded for young people.
Disadvantages and solutions
The main issue linked to the festival could be alcohol consumption and use of drugs. To minimize the effects of it, a police reinforcement would be required during this time. Costs of which will come from the company in charge of the festival. Furthermore, one of the requirements to access to this public contract should be contributing with an additional private security group.
Conclusion
Whenever the company elected follows the instructions and rules to organize the festival, this event will result in an important platform so as to attract people to our village and improve the local economy.
The following statement of the exercise is from Cambridge (it is supposed to be correct), so please do not correct it. Any mistake would be derived from using a jpg to txt tool.
You are on a planning committee. You hope to bring a music festival to your
town. Write to the mayor explaining why a music festival would be good for
your town, where it would be held, and what kinds of events there would be.
Acknowledge that there may be some disadvantages. Outline what these might
be, and how you would try to avoid them.
Write your proposal.
Music festival at "Morón"
Music festival at "Morón"
Reasons for a local music festival:
Our village is not particularly the typical tourist destination for tourists to chooselocation, even for andalusianlocal people.
There is nothing notable, especially for youthng people, beyond some areas to practice climbing and the historical centre.
Therefore, an interesting way to put end to this situation would be creating a music festival.
InWith regards to the costs associated tofrom such an important event, it should be stated that these arwould be mostly covered by the company publically elected to be in charge of it, and remaining costs willould be derived from the statale's public funds for culture.
Possible place and music events:
According to the place, the best option, by far, is the empty fields ion the outskirts of town next to the motorway, since citizens would not be affected forby the noise and related problems (as it is stated below in this proposal) and the public would not get lost.
I don't really know what you mean by "according to the place".
Because of theit would take an enormous space for the event to take place, the best option to gather as much and diverse publicdiverse an audience as possible would be settling up four stages for different kind of music: rock, electronic, reggaeton and rap.
These are the most demandedpopular genres for young people.
DisadvantageProblems and solutions:
I feel like "problems" would work better here than "disadvantages".
The main issue linked to the festival could be alcohol consumption and use of drugsdrug usage.
To minimize the effects of itpossibility of this occurring, a police reinforcement would be required during this time.
CThe costs of which willould come from the company in charge of the festival.
Furthermore, one of the requirements to access to this public contrachost the event should be contributing with an additional private security group.
Conclusion:
WheneverIf the company elected follows the instructions and rules to organize the festival, this event will result inould constitute an important platform so asull to attract people to our village and improve the local economy.
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May 9, 2023
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Music festival at "Morón" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Reasons for a local music festival Reasons for a local music festival: |
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Our village is not particularly the typical destination for tourists to choose, even for andalusian people. Our village is |
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There is nothing notable, specially for youth, beyond some areas to practice climbing and the historical centre. There is nothing notable, especially for you |
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Therefore, an interesting way to put end to this situation would be creating a music festival. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In regards to the costs associated to such an important event, it should be stated that these are mostly covered by the company publically elected to be in charge of it, and remaining costs will be derived from statal public funds for culture.
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Possible place and music events Possible place and music events: |
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According to the place, the best option, by far, is the empty fields in the outskirts next to the motorway, since citizens would not be affected for noise and related problems (as it is stated below in this proposal) and the public would not get lost. According to the place, the best option, by far, is the empty fields I don't really know what you mean by "according to the place". |
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Because of the enormous space for the event to take place, the best option to gather as much and diverse public as possible would be settling four stages for different kind of music: rock, electronic, reggaeton and rap. Because |
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These are the most demanded for young people. These are the most |
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Disadvantages and solutions
I feel like "problems" would work better here than "disadvantages". |
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The main issue linked to the festival could be alcohol consumption and use of drugs. The main issue linked to the festival could be alcohol consumption and |
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To minimize the effects of it, a police reinforcement would be required during this time. To minimize the |
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Costs of which will come from the company in charge of the festival.
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Furthermore, one of the requirements to access to this public contract should be contributing with an additional private security group. Furthermore, one of the requirements to |
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Conclusion Conclusion: |
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Whenever the company elected follows the instructions and rules to organize the festival, this event will result in an important platform so as to attract people to our village and improve the local economy.
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