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alexwong2164

Dec. 11, 2021

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Music collects to your soul

Now I know why!

I love listening songs.

But I never read all the lyrics.

Sometimes I feel guilty because if I really love the songs.

I should understand the message.

So, today I did that!

I read the whole lyrics and watched the video too.

Unfortunately, this process makes me less like the songs.

Because when I listen to a song, I will have my own imagination.

Some of old MTV are very cheap production.

Reading the whole lyrics did make me understand the song.

But the romance was disappeared.

Do you have the same experience?

Corrections

Music collectspeaks to your soul

I’m not sure what “collect” means but maybe “music speaks to the soul” or “music captivates your soul” is more clear

I love listening to songs.

So, today, I did that!

I read the wholall the lyrics and watched the video too.

You use “the whole” for a single thing. “I ate the whole burger.” “He listened to the whole song.” But you use “all” for plural objects. “He ate all the candy.” “I want all the cats.”

Unfortunately, this process makes me less like the songs. less.

Word order is more natural here

Because when I listen to a song, I will have my own imagination.

Don’t need the “will” since you used “when I listen” which signifies you need to stay in present tense.

Some of old MTV are very cheap production(videos) are produced very cheaply .

You need to be specific about what “MTV” means. Videos or music??

Reading the wholall the lyrics did make me understand the song.

Same reason above ^^^

But the romance was disappeared.

Don’t need this “was” because “disappeared” is already past tense and does not need helping verb here.

DoHave you haved the same experience?

This is a bit more natural!

Feedback

Yup, I definitely agree that lyrics can change the meaning of a song to you. Sometimes when I listen to stuff and look up the lyrics later, it’ll definitely affect my opinion and feelings on the song! Sometimes in positive ways or negative ways hahah.

Music collects to your soul


Music collectspeaks to your soul

I’m not sure what “collect” means but maybe “music speaks to the soul” or “music captivates your soul” is more clear

Now I know why!


I love listening songs.


I love listening to songs.

But I never read all the lyrics.


Sometimes I feel guilty because if I really love the songs.


I should understand the message.


So, today I did that!


So, today, I did that!

I read the whole lyrics and watched the video too.


I read the wholall the lyrics and watched the video too.

You use “the whole” for a single thing. “I ate the whole burger.” “He listened to the whole song.” But you use “all” for plural objects. “He ate all the candy.” “I want all the cats.”

Unfortunately, this process makes me less like the songs.


Unfortunately, this process makes me less like the songs. less.

Word order is more natural here

Because when I listen to a song, I will have my own imagination.


Because when I listen to a song, I will have my own imagination.

Don’t need the “will” since you used “when I listen” which signifies you need to stay in present tense.

Some of old MTV are very cheap production.


Some of old MTV are very cheap production(videos) are produced very cheaply .

You need to be specific about what “MTV” means. Videos or music??

Reading the whole lyrics did make me understand the song.


Reading the wholall the lyrics did make me understand the song.

Same reason above ^^^

But the romance was disappeared.


But the romance was disappeared.

Don’t need this “was” because “disappeared” is already past tense and does not need helping verb here.

Do you have the same experience?


DoHave you haved the same experience?

This is a bit more natural!

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