Nov. 2, 2021
Music
We all love music, we all like listening to songs, everyone knows that. I particularly like to listen to songs almost all the time. My favorite musical rhythms are Country, hip-hop, Electronic, and more.
It is so good to listen to songs, I mean, every time I listen to songs I feel like I am in another world. It is so good. There are times when the song tells exactly what you feel. Even though you are in problems, You feel better after doing that. . I like doing it in different situations. For example, when I start to learn a language, I like to look for songs that are sung in that language, so I can do what I like to do and learn a language at the same time and that is so good.
People are different. They have different hobbies and kinds of things like that. People have a favorite song, a favorite band, kind of thing, they also have a favorite rhythm. Maybe, not everyone has a favorite song or band, but everyone likes songs, so let me know what you think about, and what is your favorite musical rhythm?
Todos nós amamos música, todos gostamos de ouvir músicas, todos sabem disso. Eu particularmente gosto de ouvir músicas quase o tempo todo. Meus ritmos musicais favoritos são Country, hip-hop, eletrônico e muito mais. É tão bom ouvir músicas, quer dizer, toda vez que ouço músicas me sinto como se estivesse em outro mundo. É tão bom. Há momentos em que a música diz exatamente o que você sente. Mesmo que você esteja com problemas, Você se sente melhor depois de fazer isso. . Gosto de fazer isso em diferentes situações. Por exemplo, quando começo a aprender um idioma, gosto de procurar músicas que sejam cantadas nesse idioma, para poder fazer o que gosto e aprender um idioma ao mesmo tempo e isso é tão bom. As pessoas são diferentes. Eles têm diferentes hobbies e coisas assim. As pessoas têm uma música favorita, uma banda favorita, tipo de coisa, também têm um ritmo favorito. Talvez nem todo mundo tenha uma música ou banda favorita, mas todo mundo gosta de músicas, então me diga o que você acha e qual é o seu ritmo musical favorito?
Music
We all love music, we all like listening to songs, everyone knows that.
I particularly like to listen to songs almost all of the time.
My favorite musical rhythms are Country, hip-hop, Electronic, and more.
It is so good to listen to songs, I mean, every time I listen to songs I feel like I am in another world.
It is so good.
There are times when the song tells exactly what you feel.
Even though you are inmay have problems, Yyou feel better after doing that.
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I like doing it in different situations. (I would start this sentence over for better clarity.)
I would expand on this thought. Maybe an example? "Doing it" can have another meaning.
For example, when I start to learn a language, I like to look for songs that are sung in that language, so I can do what I like to doenjoy music and learn a new language at the same time and that is so good.
"that are sung" is repetitive. It's already implied in songs. "do what I like to do" is vague. I deleted "and that is so good," because you already mentioned you like it.
People are different.
They have different hobbies and kinds of things like that.
People have a favorite song, a favorite band, kind of thing,and they also have a favorite rhythm.
"kind of thing" is vague.
Maybe, not everyone has a favorite song or band, but everyone likes songs, s. So let me know what you think about, and what is your favorite musical rhythm?
"you think about" is vague. Can mean about music and life.
Feedback
I'm not sure your age and I know English is a difficult language, but you did a great job overall. There were a few phrases that could be revised, but all in all very good. I don't think you are a beginner.
Nov. 3, 2021
I am 18 years old.
I took a test and the result was A2.
Thanks for answering.
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We all love music, we all like listening to songs, everyone knows that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I particularly like to listen to songs almost all the time. I particularly like to listen to songs almost all of the time. |
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My favorite musical rhythms are Country, hip-hop, Electronic, and more. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is so good to listen to songs, I mean, every time I listen to songs I feel like I am in another world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is so good. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are times when the song tells exactly what you feel. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even though you are in problems, You feel better after doing that. Even though you |
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I like doing it in different situations. I like doing it in different situations. (I would start this sentence over for better clarity.) I would expand on this thought. Maybe an example? "Doing it" can have another meaning. |
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For example, when I start to learn a language, I like to look for songs that are sung in that language, so I can do what I like to do and learn a language at the same time and that is so good. For example, when I start to learn a language, I like to look for songs "that are sung" is repetitive. It's already implied in songs. "do what I like to do" is vague. I deleted "and that is so good," because you already mentioned you like it. |
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People are different. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They have different hobbies and kinds of things like that. They have different hobbies and |
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People have a favorite song, a favorite band, kind of thing, they also have a favorite rhythm. People have a favorite song, a favorite band, "kind of thing" is vague. |
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Maybe, not everyone has a favorite song or band, but everyone likes songs, so let me know what you think about, and what is your favorite musical rhythm? Maybe "you think about" is vague. Can mean about music and life. |
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