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Last night, my students were so noise that I could hear them even though I was in the classroom nearby. I warned them that if they were noise one more time, they would be punished for running 10 rounds. It seemed nobody cared, because when I just went in the other classroom, I heard them again. So I came back and nominated three boys to run tomorrow.
Today, after they running in a group, I asked the boys to run. I put on my earphone and listened to music when I was couting their rounds. It was cool and sunny. I was listening the new album of Fool & Idiot. Several songs are old fashion? I wasn't sure, but the instruments are really good. I felt like I had my little own world which was separated from the students.
Tonight, I was reading at dusk. I suddenly want to hear the song "the stars under the sun" (阳光下的星星) which I liked a lot when I was in college. I think the best moment to listen to it was at winter dusk through the campus radio. It was a little sad, so it was quite suitable for the dusk which was also a little sad. However, I heard several times tonight, I didn't feel any sad. On the contrary, I was quite peaceful, or maybe a little pleasant. I was so surprised. Maybe I became more mature or number than before. I heard the song "the wind of summer night" (夏夜晚风) from different singers, I think all of them are good. Maybe just as a comment said, "it is so good that nobody will ruin the song." I also heard a Cantonese song "blessing" (祝福--叶倩文), it brought me to a small town which was dramatic. Coincidently, there were someone who was listening the old Cantonese songs which were older than me.
When I feel uncomfortable, I will listen to music to distract my pain, and it works most of time. Thanks to music, it provide me a wodenful world. I still can remember a dialogue from a Taiwan movie, "music is the sense of security of hearing," I can't agree more.

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Music

Last night, my students were so noisey that I could hear them even though I was in thea classroom nearby.

I warned them that if they weremade too much noise one more time, theyI would be punished for running 10 them by making them round 10 laps.

It seemed that nobody cared, because when I just, as soon as I went in the other classroom, I heard them again.

"as soon as..., ..." is a good analog for 一...就...

So, I camewent back and nominated"volunteered" three boys to run tomorrow.

Today, after they running in students ran as a group, I asked the boys to run some more separately.

I put oin my earphones and listened to music when I was coutingas I counted their roundlaps.

It was cool and sunny.

I was listening the new album of Fool & Idiot album.

Several songs are very...old -fashioned?

I wasn''m not sure, but the instruments awere really good regardless.

I felt like I hadwas in my little own world. which was separated from the students.

Tonight, I was reading at duskdid some reading.

Adding "at dusk" is redundant.

I suddenly wantfelt the urge to hear the song "tThe sStars uUnder the sSun" (阳光下的星星), which I liked a lot when I was in college.

I think the best momentway to listen to it wais at dusk in winter dusk, through the campus radio.

It was a little sad, so it was quite suitable for the duskevening, which was also a little sad.

I love this sentence

However, I heardTonight, however, I listened to it several times tonight,, but I didn't feel any sadness.

On the contrary, I was quite peaceful, or maybecalm, even a little pleasanthappy.

I was so surprised.

Maybe IPerhaps I had becaome more mature, or more number, than before.

"Number" looks too much like number (123) haha, this way you also reduplicate "more"

I heard the song "the windlistened to a few different covers of s"Summer nNight Wind" (夏夜晚风) from different singers,; I think all of them are good.

I don't know which ones you've listened to, but of the ones I've listened to: Layton Wu > Wu Bai >>> deca joins. Of Wu Bai's songs, I think "Last Dance" is still my favorite.

Maybe just, as a comment said, "itI found online said, "this song is so good that, nobody willcan ruin ithe song."

I also heardlistened to a Cantonese song, "bBlessing" (祝福--叶倩文), it brought. It transported me to a small town which was, and it felt very dramatic.

I might be wrong, but hear vs listen is kind of like 听到 vs 听见. If you hear something, it just means that the sound reached your ears. When you listen to something, you are actively focusing on it. That's why sometimes people will say, "are you listening to me?!" to ask if the person they're talking to is paying attention.

CoincidentFunnily, there weare someonpeople who was listening the old to Cantonese songs which wereare much older than I ame.

If you're talking about a specific person you saw, let me know, otherwise my correction is right.

When I feel uncomfortable, I will listen to music to distract my pain, and ie from the feeling. It works most of time.

Thanks to music, it provide meI can escape into a wondenrful world.

I still can remember a line of dialogue from a Taiwanese movie,: "music is the sense of security of hearing,." I caouldn't agree more.

Can you give me the quote? Sounds a little weird as you've written it.

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Nice! Listening to music as I correct this. Current song is "Eddie's Rush" by Ultimate Spinach

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kiwy

Oct. 30, 2021

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I heard the song "the windlistened to a few different covers of s"Summer nNight Wind" (夏夜晚风) from different singers,; I think all of them are good.

you can hear the cover of 杨英格, I think it is also wonderful.
Wu Bai made an album whose name is "五朵金花" to Karen Mo(莫文蔚), it is really good! But some songs are Cantonese, maybe you need to see the lyrics while listening.

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kiwy

Oct. 30, 2021

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CoincidentFunnily, there weare someonpeople who was listening the old to Cantonese songs which wereare much older than I ame.

I don't know the guy. The sound came outside nearby.

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Oct. 30, 2021

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I still can remember a line of dialogue from a Taiwanese movie,: "music is the sense of security of hearing,." I caouldn't agree more.

音乐是听觉上的安全感。--《单车环岛日记》

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kiwy

Oct. 30, 2021

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I've listened a song like this before. It sounds like I am sitting in a small tavern. What do you name the style like this?

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sivanc

Oct. 30, 2021

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That genre is called psychedelic rock, but that song especially is very similar to a blues song.

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sivanc

Oct. 30, 2021

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you can hear the cover of 杨英格, I think it is also wonderful. Wu Bai made an album whose name is "五朵金花" to Karen Mo(莫文蔚), it is really good! But some songs are Cantonese, maybe you need to see the lyrics while listening.

I tried to find his version but I couldn't find one without like, game show host commentary over the music, haha. I'll check that wu bai album out!

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sivanc

Oct. 30, 2021

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音乐是听觉上的安全感。--《单车环岛日记》

Hmm, I get the words within the quote but don't really understand what it's trying to say. I would maybe change " of hearing" then to "for our ears"

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sivanc

Oct. 30, 2021

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I don't know the guy. The sound came outside nearby.

Ah ok, then "Coincidentally, someone drove by, listening to an Cantonese song much older than I am."

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kiwy

Oct. 31, 2021

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I tried to find his version but I couldn't find one without like, game show host commentary over the music, haha. I'll check that wu bai album out!

https://v.qq.com/x/cover/mzc00200bgzqqmh/r0034uisq2l.html the song of Yang Yingge. He took part in a show. There is also a guy named 蒋先贵 sings very well, his lyrics are better.

I was so surprised.


I was so surprised.

I was listening the new album of Fool & Idiot.


I was listening the new album of Fool & Idiot album.

Maybe I became more mature or number than before.


Maybe IPerhaps I had becaome more mature, or more number, than before.

"Number" looks too much like number (123) haha, this way you also reduplicate "more"

Music


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Last night, my students were so noise that I could hear them even though I was in the classroom nearby.


Last night, my students were so noisey that I could hear them even though I was in thea classroom nearby.

I warned them that if they were noise one more time, they would be punished for running 10 rounds.


I warned them that if they weremade too much noise one more time, theyI would be punished for running 10 them by making them round 10 laps.

It seemed nobody cared, because when I just went in the other classroom, I heard them again.


It seemed that nobody cared, because when I just, as soon as I went in the other classroom, I heard them again.

"as soon as..., ..." is a good analog for 一...就...

So I came back and nominated three boys to run tomorrow.


So, I camewent back and nominated"volunteered" three boys to run tomorrow.

Today, after they running in a group, I asked the boys to run.


Today, after they running in students ran as a group, I asked the boys to run some more separately.

I put on my earphone and listened to music when I was couting their rounds.


I put oin my earphones and listened to music when I was coutingas I counted their roundlaps.

It was cool and sunny.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Several songs are old fashion?


Several songs are very...old -fashioned?

I wasn't sure, but the instruments are really good.


I wasn''m not sure, but the instruments awere really good regardless.

I felt like I had my little own world which was separated from the students.


I felt like I hadwas in my little own world. which was separated from the students.

Tonight, I was reading at dusk.


Tonight, I was reading at duskdid some reading.

Adding "at dusk" is redundant.

I suddenly want to hear the song "the stars under the sun" (阳光下的星星) which I liked a lot when I was in college.


I suddenly wantfelt the urge to hear the song "tThe sStars uUnder the sSun" (阳光下的星星), which I liked a lot when I was in college.

I think the best moment to listen to it was at winter dusk through the campus radio.


I think the best momentway to listen to it wais at dusk in winter dusk, through the campus radio.

It was a little sad, so it was quite suitable for the dusk which was also a little sad.


It was a little sad, so it was quite suitable for the duskevening, which was also a little sad.

I love this sentence

However, I heard several times tonight, I didn't feel any sad.


However, I heardTonight, however, I listened to it several times tonight,, but I didn't feel any sadness.

On the contrary, I was quite peaceful, or maybe a little pleasant.


On the contrary, I was quite peaceful, or maybecalm, even a little pleasanthappy.

I heard the song "the wind of summer night" (夏夜晚风) from different singers, I think all of them are good.


I heard the song "the windlistened to a few different covers of s"Summer nNight Wind" (夏夜晚风) from different singers,; I think all of them are good.

I don't know which ones you've listened to, but of the ones I've listened to: Layton Wu > Wu Bai >>> deca joins. Of Wu Bai's songs, I think "Last Dance" is still my favorite.

Maybe just as a comment said, "it is so good that nobody will ruin the song."


Maybe just, as a comment said, "itI found online said, "this song is so good that, nobody willcan ruin ithe song."

I also heard a Cantonese song "blessing" (祝福--叶倩文), it brought me to a small town which was dramatic.


I also heardlistened to a Cantonese song, "bBlessing" (祝福--叶倩文), it brought. It transported me to a small town which was, and it felt very dramatic.

I might be wrong, but hear vs listen is kind of like 听到 vs 听见. If you hear something, it just means that the sound reached your ears. When you listen to something, you are actively focusing on it. That's why sometimes people will say, "are you listening to me?!" to ask if the person they're talking to is paying attention.

Coincidently, there were someone who was listening the old Cantonese songs which were older than me.


CoincidentFunnily, there weare someonpeople who was listening the old to Cantonese songs which wereare much older than I ame.

If you're talking about a specific person you saw, let me know, otherwise my correction is right.

When I feel uncomfortable, I will listen to music to distract my pain, and it works most of time.


When I feel uncomfortable, I will listen to music to distract my pain, and ie from the feeling. It works most of time.

Thanks to music, it provide me a wodenful world.


Thanks to music, it provide meI can escape into a wondenrful world.

I still can remember a dialogue from a Taiwan movie, "music is the sense of security of hearing," I can't agree more.


I still can remember a line of dialogue from a Taiwanese movie,: "music is the sense of security of hearing,." I caouldn't agree more.

Can you give me the quote? Sounds a little weird as you've written it.

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