Aug. 12, 2021
Mushrooms
One day, I went for a walked with my nephew when he was 3 years old. He pointed at a notice board and told me that it was a strawberry. I refuted him and told him that was a mushroom. He disagreed with me and insisted it was a strawberry. I also insisted on telling him it was a mushroom. Finally, he got angery and spoke aloud: strawberry, strawberry, strawberry! Fearing he would cry, I said nothing.
When coming back home, I showed him the picture of mushrooms. He was interested in them very soon and asked me to wacth some vedios with him. We watched some vedios. He was very exciting and kept talking about the mushrooms with. He wasn't able to read, therefore I would tell him the names of the mushrooms.
From then on, mushrooms are the second interest of his, behind the fans. When he walked played in the garden, he would try to find mushrooms. In order to let him know more about mushrooms, I took him to the supermarket and showed the mushrooms to him. Nevertheless, he hardly remembered a single name, nor did I. I would asked him whether we should buy some, he said yes. Whereas, he didn't give a bite. The consolation was that he could recognise a kind of mushrooms which could make soup.
Sometimes, I wonder does he really like mushrooms because he never try to learn the details of them. But I realize that I can't remember any details of mushrooms either while it is very hard to do so. I should be more patient to him, he will grow up in his own way.
When I visited him a few days earlier, he told me there was XX (a kind of mushrooms) in the garden. I was sure the name was wrong whereas I couldn't tell the right name. But I was so delighted that he could tell a name.
Mushrooms
One day, I went for a walked with my nephew when he was 3 years old.
I would rephrase to "Once, when my nephew was three years-old, we went for a walk."
He pointed at a notice board and told me that it was a strawberry.
I refucorrected him and told him that was a mushroom.
He disagreed with me and insisted it was a strawberry.
I also insisted on telling him it was a mushroom.
"on telling him" is an odd phrasing. Not natural.
Finally, he got angery and spoke alouaid: strawberry, strawberry, strawberry!
Fearing he would cry, I said nothing.
WheUpon coming back home, I showed him the pictures of mushrooms.
He wasbecame very interested in them very soon and asked me to wactch some vediideos with him.
We watched some vediideos.
He was very excitinged and kept talking about the mushrooms with me.
with who?
He wasn't able to read, thereforeso I would tell him the names of the mushrooms.
From then on, mushrooms arehave been the second-biggest interest of his, behind the fans.
Whenever he walked or played in the garden, he would try to find mushrooms.
In order to let him knowlearn more about mushrooms, I took him to the supermarket and showed him the mushrooms to him.
Nevertheless, he hardly remembered a single name, nor did I. I would asked him whether we should buy some, he said yes.
Whereas, he didn't give a bite.
Not sure what you're trying to say here so I can't correct it. "But, he didn't eat any?"
The consolation was that he could recognise a kind of mushrooms which could make soup.
Sometimes, I wonder doesif he really likes mushrooms because he never tryies to learn their details of them.
But I realize that I can't remember any details of mushrooms either whilbecause it is very hard to do so.
I should be more patient to him, because he will grow up in his own way.
When I visited him a few days earlier, he told me there was XX (a kind of mushrooms) in the garden.
I was sure the name was wrong whereasbut I couldn't tell the right name.
But I was so delighted that he could tell a namename a mushroom.
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I refuted him and told him that was a mushroom. I |
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One day, I went for a walked with my nephew when he was 3 years old. One day, I went for a walk I would rephrase to "Once, when my nephew was three years-old, we went for a walk." |
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He pointed at a notice board and told me that it was a strawberry. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He disagreed with me and insisted it was a strawberry. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also insisted on telling him it was a mushroom. I also insisted "on telling him" is an odd phrasing. Not natural. |
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Finally, he got angery and spoke aloud: strawberry, strawberry, strawberry! Finally, he got ang |
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Fearing he would cry, I said nothing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When coming back home, I showed him the picture of mushrooms.
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He was interested in them very soon and asked me to wacth some vedios with him. He |
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We watched some vedios. We watched some v |
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He was very exciting and kept talking about the mushrooms with. He was very excit with who? |
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He wasn't able to read, therefore I would tell him the names of the mushrooms. He wasn't able to read, |
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From then on, mushrooms are the second interest of his, behind the fans. From then on, mushrooms |
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When he walked played in the garden, he would try to find mushrooms. Whenever he walked or played in the garden, he would try to find mushrooms. |
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In order to let him know more about mushrooms, I took him to the supermarket and showed the mushrooms to him. In order to let him |
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Nevertheless, he hardly remembered a single name, nor did I. I would asked him whether we should buy some, he said yes. Nevertheless, he hardly remembered a single name, nor did I. I would ask |
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Whereas, he didn't give a bite. Whereas, he didn't give a bite. Not sure what you're trying to say here so I can't correct it. "But, he didn't eat any?" |
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The consolation was that he could recognise a kind of mushrooms which could make soup. The consolation was that he could recognise a kind of mushroom |
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Sometimes, I wonder does he really like mushrooms because he never try to learn the details of them. Sometimes, I wonder |
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But I realize that I can't remember any details of mushrooms either while it is very hard to do so. But I realize that I can't remember any details of mushrooms either |
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I should be more patient to him, he will grow up in his own way. I should be more patient to him |
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When I visited him a few days earlier, he told me there was XX (a kind of mushrooms) in the garden. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was sure the name was wrong whereas I couldn't tell the right name. I was sure the name was wrong |
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But I was so delighted that he could tell a name. But I was so delighted that he could |
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