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Museums during Business Trip

I visited Warsaw during my business trip.

Warsaw is the capital city in Poland and there are many museums there.

One of my hobbies in that visiting museums during travel, so I got the chance during the business trip as well.

Many museums were impressive and I will describe three ones.

Firstly, the Warsaw city museum.

Warsaw was completely destroyed during WW II, but it was rebuilt as same as before.

It was because of peoples' effort and the city becomes a world heritage.

The museum showed about the history.

Secondly, it was Chopin museum.

Poland is a homeland of Chopin and many Polishs still love him.

I could feel it during touring the museum.

Lastly and my most impressive museum is the War memorial museum.

The museum has many pictures and stories about two world wars.

I could see the real battle plane and tanks.

Because Korea has similar stories during WW II, I concentrated more about watching the museum.

This is the end of my story during the business trip.

If I will have another chance to go to Warsaw, I would visit other museums.

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Visiting Museums during a Business Trip

I visited Warsaw during one of my business trips.

Warsaw is the capital city inof Poland and t. There are many museums there.

One of my hobbies ins thato visiting museums during my travels, sowhich I got the chance to during theat business trip as well.

Many museums wereThere are many impressive andmuseums but I will describchoose three onesto talk about.

When you use past tense, it implies those museums either no longer exist or aren't impressive anymore, which I don't think is your intention. Past travels should be talked about in past tense, but the places you've visited continue to exist before and after you've visited so you would use present tense when describing them. I hope that makes sense!

Firstly, there is the Warsaw cCity mMuseum.

Warsaw was completely destroyed during WW II, but it was rebuilt as same as beforefterwards.

It was bBecause of peoples's effort ands, the city becoames a world heritage site.

The museum showed abouts the history of the city.

Secondly, it wasthere is the Chopin museum.

Poland is a homeland of Chopin, and m famous composer. Many Polishs still love him.

Alt: Many Polish people

I could feel ithe love for him during my touring around the museum.

Lastly and my most impressive museum is the War memorial museum, there is the War Memorial Museum. It was my favorite of them all and the one I was the most impressed by.

The museum has many pictures and stories about the two wWorld wWars.

I could see thgot to see real battle planes and tanks.

BecausSince Korea has similar stories during WW II, I concentrated more about watchpaid extra close attention while visiting the museum.

This is the end of my story about visiting museums during themy business trip.

If I will have another chance to go to Warsaw in the future, I would visit other museums.

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SummerTeaWater

Aug. 2, 2021

402

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Museums during Business Trip


Visiting Museums during a Business Trip

I visited Warsaw during my business trip.


I visited Warsaw during one of my business trips.

Warsaw is the capital city in Poland and there are many museums there.


Warsaw is the capital city inof Poland and t. There are many museums there.

One of my hobbies in that visiting museums during travel, so I got the chance during the business trip as well.


One of my hobbies ins thato visiting museums during my travels, sowhich I got the chance to during theat business trip as well.

Many museums were impressive and I will describe three ones.


Many museums wereThere are many impressive andmuseums but I will describchoose three onesto talk about.

When you use past tense, it implies those museums either no longer exist or aren't impressive anymore, which I don't think is your intention. Past travels should be talked about in past tense, but the places you've visited continue to exist before and after you've visited so you would use present tense when describing them. I hope that makes sense!

Firstly, the Warsaw city museum.


Firstly, there is the Warsaw cCity mMuseum.

Warsaw was completely destroyed during WW II, but it was rebuilt as same as before.


Warsaw was completely destroyed during WW II, but it was rebuilt as same as beforefterwards.

It was because of peoples' effort and the city becomes a world heritage.


It was bBecause of peoples's effort ands, the city becoames a world heritage site.

The museum showed about the history.


The museum showed abouts the history of the city.

Secondly, it was Chopin museum.


Secondly, it wasthere is the Chopin museum.

Poland is a homeland of Chopin and many Polishs still love him.


Poland is a homeland of Chopin, and m famous composer. Many Polishs still love him.

Alt: Many Polish people

I could feel it during touring the museum.


I could feel ithe love for him during my touring around the museum.

Lastly and my most impressive museum is the War memorial museum.


Lastly and my most impressive museum is the War memorial museum, there is the War Memorial Museum. It was my favorite of them all and the one I was the most impressed by.

The museum has many pictures and stories about two world wars.


The museum has many pictures and stories about the two wWorld wWars.

I could see the real battle plane and tanks.


I could see thgot to see real battle planes and tanks.

Because Korea has similar stories during WW II, I concentrated more about watching the museum.


BecausSince Korea has similar stories during WW II, I concentrated more about watchpaid extra close attention while visiting the museum.

This is the end of my story during the business trip.


This is the end of my story about visiting museums during themy business trip.

If I will have another chance to go to Warsaw, I would visit other museums.


If I will have another chance to go to Warsaw in the future, I would visit other museums.

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