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Nov. 4, 2025

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Murderbot Season 1

I watched Apple TV's Murderbot this summer holiday. I do not watch TV show regulary, specially Science Fiction. But I clicked in when it pop out on my screen. There were only 2 episodes available when I found that show, each episode is about 20 minutes. And I just couldn't stop to watching. 40 minutes goes fast. And I'm far from satsfied.The show is releasing once a week, and I was preparing my College entrance exam that time. So I said it to myself, Im only watch this to practice my english, only in a more joyfull way. This show is about a waken android who wants to destroy the human but can never because he loves human.The android is a secunit, he was created to protect paying clients. He call himself murderbot, but he never hurt human by his own will.He likes watching TV shows, self-talking and complain how could human be that stupid.He told to himself million times to leave those humans and let them die in a unknow planet, but he never leave. I really like the build and shifts of the characters and the casting. But the costume were not that great, the protective clothing of the murderbot was an armor-print onesies.


这个暑假我看了Apple TV 的杀戮人机。我平常不怎么看电视剧的,尤其是科幻类。但是当这个节目在我的电脑屏幕上蹦出来后,我还是鬼使神差的点了进去。当时只有各二十分钟的两集节目可以看。但是我简直着魔了。四十分钟很快就过去了但我还没有满足。这个节目每周放送一次。当时我正在备战高考。所以我这么对我自己说“我看这个仅仅是用一个更有趣的方式练习我的英语”这个节目讲述了一个觉醒了的仿生人想要毁灭世界,却无论如何都无法真的下手,因为他太爱人类了。这个仿生人是一个“护卫人机”,被设计来保护雇主的。他称呼自己为杀手机器人,但是他从没有真正的发自内心的伤害人类。他喜欢追肥皂剧,碎碎念,在心里吐槽人类怎么会这么愚蠢。他自己跟自己说了几百万次要离开他的雇主留他们在陌生的星球上自生自灭,但是从始至终他都留在这些人身边。我喜欢这部剧的人物塑造和变化,选角。但是它的服化道就没这么好了。杀手机器人身上的防护服居然只是印着盔甲图案的连体衣。

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I watched Apple TV's Murderbot this summer holiday.

I do not usually watch TV show regulary, s, especially Sscience Ffiction shows.

But, I clicked inon it when it popped out onf my screen.

There were only 2 episodes available when I found that show, e. Each episode isruns for about 20 minutes.

And I just couldn't stop to watching.

40Forty minutes goes fast by so fast, and I'm still far from satisfied.

merged this sentence with the next one for better flow.

And I'm far from satsfied.

The show is releasinged once a week, and I was preparing for my Ccollege entrance exam that the time.

So I said it told myself, I"I'm only watching this to practice my eEnglish, only.", in a humore joyfullous way.

This show is about a n awakened android who wants to destroy the humanity, but canould never do so because he loves humans.

slightly better rephrasing

The android is a sSecuUnit, hewho was created to protect paying clients.

They capitalize "SecUnit" in that show, so let's do that as well.

He calls himself m"Murderbot", but he could never hurt human by his own wills willingly.

He likes watching TV shows, self-talking to himself and complain how could human be thating about how humans could be so stupid.

He toldhas already told himself a million times to leave those humans andbehind and just let them die in an unknown planet, but he could never leave.

But the costumes were not that great, t. The protective clothing of the mMurderbot was an armor-print onesies.

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yanwang

Nov. 4, 2025

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I made soo many mistakes, thank you for your meticulous correction. I hope I have expressed my gratitude fully.

But the costume were not that great, the protective clothing of the muderbot was an armor-print onesies.


Murderbot Season 1


I watched Apple TV's Murderbot this summer holiday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I do not watch TV show regulary, specially Science Fiction.


I do not usually watch TV show regulary, s, especially Sscience Ffiction shows.

But I clicked in when it pop out on my scream.


There were only 2 episodes available when I fond that show, each episode is about 20 minutes.


There were only 2 episodes available when I found that show, e. Each episode isruns for about 20 minutes.

And I just couldn't stop to watching.


And I just couldn't stop to watching.

40 minutes goes fast.


40Forty minutes goes fast by so fast, and I'm still far from satisfied.

merged this sentence with the next one for better flow.

And I'm far from satsfied.


And I'm far from satsfied.

The show is releasing once a week, and I was preparing my College entrance exam that time.


The show is releasinged once a week, and I was preparing for my Ccollege entrance exam that the time.

So I said it to myself, Im only watch this to practice my english, only in a more joyfull way.


So I said it told myself, I"I'm only watching this to practice my eEnglish, only.", in a humore joyfullous way.

This show is about a waken android who wants to destroy the human but can never because he loves human.


This show is about a n awakened android who wants to destroy the humanity, but canould never do so because he loves humans.

slightly better rephrasing

The android is a secunit, he was created to protect paying clients.


The android is a sSecuUnit, hewho was created to protect paying clients.

They capitalize "SecUnit" in that show, so let's do that as well.

He call himself muderbot, but he never hurt human by his own will.


He likes watching TV shows, self-talking and complain how could human be that stupid.


He likes watching TV shows, self-talking to himself and complain how could human be thating about how humans could be so stupid.

He told to himself million times to leave those humans and let them die in a unknow planet, but he never leave.


He toldhas already told himself a million times to leave those humans andbehind and just let them die in an unknown planet, but he could never leave.

I really like the build and shifts of the characters and the casting.


But I clicked in when it pop out on my scream, for no reason.


But the costume were not that great, the protective clothing of the murderbot was an armor-print onesies.


But the costumes were not that great, t. The protective clothing of the mMurderbot was an armor-print onesies.

He call himself murderbot, but he never hurt human by his own will.


He calls himself m"Murderbot", but he could never hurt human by his own wills willingly.

But I clicked in when it pop out on my screen.


But, I clicked inon it when it popped out onf my screen.

There were only 2 episodes available when I found that show, each episode is about 20 minutes.


There is only 2 episodes were available when I fond that show, each episode is about 20 minutes.


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