Nov. 28, 2022
Murder on the orient express
Part 1
It was five o’clock on a winter’s morning. M. Poirot stand on the platform with a general.
The general thanked M. Poirot for his help. After their conversation, the general left and a lieutenant was delegated the duty of seeing off M. Poirot. The Lieutenant tried to converse with M. Poirot in order to avoid silence.
A lady on the train looked at the two men through the window. The train was going to leave, but M. Poirot climbed aboard the train till the last minute and the Lieutenant finally finished his speech.
There are two Englishes on the train. M. Poirot went to the restaurant to search of hot coffee.
Meanwhile the lady was sitting in the restaurant. Her name is Mary. M. Poirot observed Mary, he judged Mary has poise and efficiency. another English also got in the restaurant and sat on the chair opposite Mary. M. Poirot listened to their conversations.
The train would delay. Mary wanted to catch the next train. If there is an hour or two delay, she would miss her connection. Eventually the train was arrived only five minute late, having made up time on the journey.
Murder on the oOrient eExpress
Part 1
It was five o’clock on a winter’s morning.
M. Poirot stanood on the platform with athe general.
The general thanked M. Poirot for his help.
After their conversation, the general left and a lieutenant was delegatassigned the duty of seeing off M. Poirot.
The Lieutenant tried to converse with M. Poirot in order to avoid silence.
A lady on the train looked at the two men through the window.
The train was going to leave, but M. Poirot climbed aboard the train atill the last minute and the Lieutenant finally finished his speech.
There awere two Englishesmen on the train.
Try to pay attention to verb tense. You started with past tense so I'm correcting accordingly.
M. Poirot went to the restaurant to search ofor hot coffee.
Meanwhile the lady was sitting in the restaurant.
Her name iwas Mary.
M. Poirot observed Mary, h. He judged Mary has having poise and efficiency.
aAnother English also got inman entered the restaurant and sat oin the chair opposite Mary.
M. Poirot listened to their conversations.
The train wouldas delayed.
Mary wanted to catch the next train.
If there iswere an hour or two delay, she would miss her connection.
This is subjunctive case so we use "were" instead of "was."
Eventually, the train was arrived only five minutes late, having made up time on the journey.
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The train was going to leave, but M. Poirot climbed aboard the train till the last minute and the Lieutenant finally finished his speech. The train was going to leave, but M. Poirot climbed aboard the train at |
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There are two Englishes on the train. There Try to pay attention to verb tense. You started with past tense so I'm correcting accordingly. |
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M. Poirot went to the restaurant to search of hot coffee. M. Poirot went to the restaurant to search |
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Her name is Mary. Her name |
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M. Poirot observed Mary, he judged Mary has poise and efficiency. M. Poirot observed Mary |
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another English also got in the restaurant and sat on the chair opposite Mary.
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The train would delay. The train w |
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If there is an hour or two delay, she would miss her connection. If there This is subjunctive case so we use "were" instead of "was." |
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Eventually the train was arrived only five minute late, having made up time on the journey. Eventually, the train |
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