Nov. 29, 2022
Murder on Orient Express Part 2
At the Tokatlian Hotel, Poirot asked for a room with bath, but he had to leave right now after he read a telegram. He asked the concierge to book a sleeper, First-class. After that, he went to the restaurant. M. Bouc, the director of the Copagnie Internationale des Wagons Lits, found M. Poirot and said to him. they both would leave tonight.
There were two men that interested Poirot in the restaurant. One of them glanced on Poirot for a moment and just for that second there was a strange malevolence, an unnatural tensity in the glance.
The concierge came to Poirot and looked concerned and apologetic. He told to Poirot there was not one first-class sleeping berth on the train. However, Bouc said the No.16 was always empty, so they went to the station together.
At the Station, the conductor said the No.16 was taken and the train was full. So Poirot had to select the second-class sleeping berth that the person came not yet. Ultimately, Poirot entered the train and got No.7. In the No.7 there was a man. He did not want Poirot get in.
The conductor putted the luggage in the compartment, so the man had to compromise. The train started.
Murder on Orient Express, Part 2
At the Tokatlian Hotel, Poirot asked for a room with a bath, but he had to leave right now afteras soon as he read athe telegram.
He asked the concierge to book a sleeper, First-class.
After that, he went to the restaurant.
M. Bouc, the director of the Copagnie Internationale des Wagons Lits, found M. Poirot and said to him that they both would leave tonight.
they both would leave tonight.
Maybe this was just a typo.
There were two men thatwho interested Poirot in the restaurant.
Since "men" are human beings, we use "who" instead of "that" to refer to them.
One of them glanced onat Poirot for a moment and, just for that second, there was a strange malevolence, an unnatural tensity in the glance.
The concierge came to Poirot and looked concerned and apologetic.
He told to Poirot that there wasere not oneany first-class sleeping berths on the train.
However, Bouc said the No.16 was always empty, however, so they went to the station together.
We avoid using, "however," at the beginning of sentences.
At the Sstation, the conductor said that the No.16 was taken andso the train was full.
So Poirot thus had to select thea second-class sleeping berth that the person came notwhich hadn't been taken yet.
Since I corrected the previous sentence with "so," I used it's synonym, "thus," here.
Ultimately, Poirot entered the train and got No. 7.
In the No.7No. 7, there was a man.
He did not want Poirot get into enter.
The conductor putted the luggage in the compartment, so the man had to compromise.
Past tense of "put" is also "put."
The train started.
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Nicely written.
Nov. 30, 2022
However, Bouc said the No.16 was always empty, however, so they went to the station together.
I always see the usage, but I don't notice it. I know now and will pay attention later. thank you.
Nov. 30, 2022
So Poirot thus had to select thea second-class sleeping berth that the person came notwhich hadn't been taken yet.
That is great to avoid word repetition. I learned it.
Nov. 30, 2022
Thank you very much!
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Murder on Orient Express Part 2 Murder on Orient Express, Part 2 |
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At the Tokatlian Hotel, Poirot asked for a room with bath, but he had to leave right now after he read a telegram. At the Tokatlian Hotel, Poirot asked for a room with a bath, but he had to leave |
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He asked the concierge to book a sleeper, First-class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that, he went to the restaurant. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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M. Bouc, the director of the Copagnie Internationale des Wagons Lits, found M. Poirot and said to him. M. Bouc, the director of the Copagnie Internationale des Wagons Lits, found M. Poirot and said to him that they both would leave tonight. |
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they both would leave tonight.
Maybe this was just a typo. |
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There were two men that interested Poirot in the restaurant. There were two men Since "men" are human beings, we use "who" instead of "that" to refer to them. |
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One of them glanced on Poirot for a moment and just for that second there was a strange malevolence, an unnatural tensity in the glance. One of them glanced |
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The concierge came to Poirot and looked concerned and apologetic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He told to Poirot there was not one first-class sleeping berth on the train. He told |
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However, Bouc said the No.16 was always empty, so they went to the station together.
We avoid using, "however," at the beginning of sentences. |
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At the Station, the conductor said the No.16 was taken and the train was full. At the |
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So Poirot had to select the second-class sleeping berth that the person came not yet.
Since I corrected the previous sentence with "so," I used it's synonym, "thus," here. |
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Ultimately, Poirot entered the train and got No.7. Ultimately, Poirot entered the train and got No. 7. |
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In the No.7 there was a man. In |
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He did not want Poirot get in. He did not want Poirot |
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The conductor putted the luggage in the compartment, so the man had to compromise. The conductor put Past tense of "put" is also "put." |
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The train started. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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