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Nov. 29, 2022

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Murder on Orient Express Part 2

At the Tokatlian Hotel, Poirot asked for a room with bath, but he had to leave right now after he read a telegram. He asked the concierge to book a sleeper, First-class. After that, he went to the restaurant. M. Bouc, the director of the Copagnie Internationale des Wagons Lits, found M. Poirot and said to him. they both would leave tonight.
There were two men that interested Poirot in the restaurant. One of them glanced on Poirot for a moment and just for that second there was a strange malevolence, an unnatural tensity in the glance.
The concierge came to Poirot and looked concerned and apologetic. He told to Poirot there was not one first-class sleeping berth on the train. However, Bouc said the No.16 was always empty, so they went to the station together.
At the Station, the conductor said the No.16 was taken and the train was full. So Poirot had to select the second-class sleeping berth that the person came not yet. Ultimately, Poirot entered the train and got No.7. In the No.7 there was a man. He did not want Poirot get in.
The conductor putted the luggage in the compartment, so the man had to compromise. The train started.

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At the Tokatlian Hotel, Poirot asked for a room with bath, but he had to leave right nowimmediately after he read athe telegram.

"Right now" is to describe actions you are currently doing. In order to convey the instantaneousness, immediately is more accurate in this case.

He asked the concierge to book a sleeper, First-class.

After that, he went to the restaurant.

M. Bouc, the director of the Copagnie Internationale des Wagons Lits, found M. Poirot and said to him.

tThey both would leave tonight.

One of them glanced onat Poirot for a moment and just for that second there was a strange malevolence, an unnatural tensity in the glance.

The concierge came to Poirot and looked concerned and apologetic.

He told to Poirot there was not ona single first-class sleeping berth on the train.

However, Bouc said the No.16 was always empty, so they went to the station together.

At the Sstation, the conductor said the No.16 was taken and the train was full.

So Poirot had to select the second-class sleeping berth thatwhere the person camehad not yet. came.

Ultimately, Poirot entered the train and got No.7.

In the No.7, there was a man.

He did not want Poirot to get in.

The conductor putted the luggage in the compartment, so the man had to compromise.

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shishiwu

Nov. 30, 2022

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Thank you very much!

Murder on Orient Express Part 2


At the Tokatlian Hotel, Poirot asked for a room with bath, but he had to leave right now after he read a telegram.


At the Tokatlian Hotel, Poirot asked for a room with bath, but he had to leave right nowimmediately after he read athe telegram.

"Right now" is to describe actions you are currently doing. In order to convey the instantaneousness, immediately is more accurate in this case.

He asked the concierge to book a sleeper, First-class.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that, he went to the restaurant.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

M. Bouc, the director of the Copagnie Internationale des Wagons Lits, found M. Poirot and said to him.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

they both would leave tonight.


tThey both would leave tonight.

There were two men that interested Poirot in the restaurant.


One of them glanced on Poirot for a moment and just for that second there was a strange malevolence, an unnatural tensity in the glance.


One of them glanced onat Poirot for a moment and just for that second there was a strange malevolence, an unnatural tensity in the glance.

The concierge came to Poirot and looked concerned and apologetic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He told to Poirot there was not one first-class sleeping berth on the train.


He told to Poirot there was not ona single first-class sleeping berth on the train.

However, Bouc said the No.16 was always empty, so they went to the station together.


However, Bouc said the No.16 was always empty, so they went to the station together.

At the Station, the conductor said the No.16 was taken and the train was full.


At the Sstation, the conductor said the No.16 was taken and the train was full.

So Poirot had to select the second-class sleeping berth that the person came not yet.


So Poirot had to select the second-class sleeping berth thatwhere the person camehad not yet. came.

Ultimately, Poirot entered the train and got No.7.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the No.7 there was a man.


In the No.7, there was a man.

He did not want Poirot get in.


He did not want Poirot to get in.

The conductor putted the luggage in the compartment, so the man had to compromise.


The conductor putted the luggage in the compartment, so the man had to compromise.

The train started.


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