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It was my first time visitinggoing to a book club yesterday. It was my first time going to a book club yesterday.

It was my first time visitattending a book club meeting yesterday. It was my first time attending a book club meeting yesterday.

It was a specific book club for a specific genre because the organizer is a psychologist, andso we discussed about psychologicaly books. It was a book club for a specific genre because the organizer is a psychologist, so we discussed about psychology books.

Best to be more descriptive about it as calling it a "specific" book club can imply a lot of things (specific locations, contents, etc.)

It was a specific book club with a specific theme because the organizer is a psychologist, andso we discussed a psychologicaly book. It was a book club with a specific theme because the organizer is a psychologist, so we discussed a psychology book.

A psychology book is a book that has to do with psychology. A psychological book is more like a thriller

It was a specifical book club becaustoo, since the organizer is a psychologist, and we discussed a psychological book. It was a special book club too, since the organizer is a psychologist, and we discussed a psychological book.

There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although weit could have spokenlasted longer. There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although it could have lasted longer.

There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although we could have spokenprobably gone on for a bit longer. There were eight people in the club, and the discussion lasted an hour and a half, although we could have probably gone on for a bit longer.

The book suggested that our self-esteem should be based on human dignity and should not dependnot on external conditions such as career, knowledge, education, race, appearance, etcand appearance. The book suggested that our self-esteem should be based on human dignity and not on external conditions such as career, knowledge, education, race, appearance, and appearance.

Try not to use "etc." with "such as"

LGetting to listening to different opinions was a very interesting experience to me. Getting to listen to different opinions was a very interesting experience to me.

Listening to different (OR: a variety of) opinions was very interesting to me. Listening to different (OR: a variety of) opinions was very interesting to me.

Honestly, (this topic ihits close to my heart.home) (I relate with this topic) Honestly, (this topic hits close to home) (I relate with this topic)

Honestly, this topic is close to my heart. OR this topic hits close to home Honestly, this topic is close to my heart. OR this topic hits close to home

I have problems with my self-esteem asbecause external factors influence me too muchhave too much power over me, but I'm working on it. I have problems with my self-esteem because external factors have too much power over me, but I'm working on it.

I have problems with self-esteem as external factors influence me too much, butthough I'm working on it. I have problems with self-esteem as external factors influence me too much, though I'm working on it.