Jan. 15, 2025
Mugwort pancakes
I just had some pieces of mugwort pancakes. They are very delicious!
I surfing on Xiaohongshu ate everyone eats them savory.
I feel it is quite strange. I prefer like the sweet.
Mugwort can not only used in traditional Chinese medicine, but it's also very suitable to make delicious food.
Besides, we also need it during the Dragon Boat Festival.
（This composition was so difficult that I had to use translation.）
刚刚吃了几张艾草煎饼，很美味。
在小红书看到大家吃的都是咸口的，感觉很奇怪，我还是喜欢吃甜的。
艾草不仅可以用在中医上，也很适合做美食，还有端午节也需要它。
（这次的作文太困难了，我不得不用了翻译）
Mugwort pancakes
I just had some pieces of mugwort pancakes.
Unless the pancakes are very big and you only ate a part of it, you don't need to mention "pieces"
They awere very delicious!
Since you have already eaten them, you should use the past tense here.
I sSurfing on Xiaohongshu , it seems thate everyone eats them savory.
I feel ithat it's quite strange.
Your suggestion is not wrong, but my correction is just smoother.
I prefer likesweet pancakes. Or I prefer to eat them sweet.
Mugwort can not only be used in traditional Chinese medicine, but it's also very suitable tofor makeing delicious food.
Besides, we also need it during the Dragon Boat Festival.
（This composition was so difficult that I had to use a translation tool.）
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Good job. I didn't know about mugwort pancakes, so I've learned something new thanks to you :-)
Jan. 16, 2025
I'm also very grateful for your revisions!
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Mugwort pancakes This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I just had some pieces of mugwort pancakes. I just had some Unless the pancakes are very big and you only ate a part of it, you don't need to mention "pieces" |
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They are very delicious! They Since you have already eaten them, you should use the past tense here. |
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I surfing on Xiaohongshu ate everyone eats them savory.
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I feel it is quite strange. I feel Your suggestion is not wrong, but my correction is just smoother. |
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I prefer like the sweet. I prefer |
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Mugwort can not only used in traditional Chinese medicine, but it's also very suitable to make delicious food. Mugwort can not only be used in traditional Chinese medicine, but it's also very suitable |
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Besides, we also need it during the Dragon Boat Festival. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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