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I'm going to write about the character L of Death Note again.

There are two main characters called L and Light in the story.

I like L more than Light.

He has a peculiar personality, yet is very attractive.

He is quite and emotionless, but always confident.

He is intelligent, doesn't laugh at all.

He always squats down in a chair or couch.

Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he always eats something sweet.

I think that's an interesting gap in his personality.

I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate, if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural.


デスノートのキャラクターLについて、もう一回書きます。

デスノートの中にライトとLと言うキャラクターがいます。

私はライトよりLのほうが好きです。

彼は、一風変わった性格ですが、それでもかなり魅力的です。

彼は、静かで無表情ですが、いつも自信に満ち溢れています。

彼は、頭がよくて、それから全然笑いません。

いつも、いすやソファーにしゃがみ込みます。

一番面白いのは、彼は、甘いものが大好きで、いつも、何か甘いものを食べています。

このギャップが彼の性格の面白いところだよ思います。

上手く言い表せなかったので私の文章を自然に聞こえるように直してもらえると嬉しいです。

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He always squats down in a chair or couch.

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There are two main characters called L and Light in the story.

I like L more than Light.

He has a peculiar personality, yet is very attractive.

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May 9, 2024

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I like L more than Light.

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There are two main characters called L and Light in the story.

I like L more than Light.

He has a peculiar personality, yet is very attractive.

He always squats down in a chair or couch.

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There are two main characters called L and Light in the story.

I like L more than Light.

I think that's an interesting gap in his personality.

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He is quite and emotionless, but always confident.


He is quitet and emotionless, but always confident. He is quiet and emotionless, but always confident.

He is quitet and emotionless, but always confident. He is quiet and emotionless, but always confident.

He is quitet and emotionless, but always confident. He is quiet and emotionless, but always confident.

He is quitet and emotionless, but always confident. He is quiet and emotionless, but always confident.

He is quitet and emotionless, but alwayremains confident. He is quiet and emotionless but remains confident.

I wonder if he also remains calm and cool too.

He is intelligent, doesn't laugh at all.


He is intelligent, but doesn't laugh at all. He is intelligent, but doesn't laugh at all.

He is intelligent, and doesn't laugh at all. He is intelligent and doesn't laugh at all.

He is intelligent, and doesn't laugh at all. He is intelligent, and doesn't laugh at all.

He is intelligent, and doesn't laugh at all. He is intelligent and doesn't laugh at all.

He is intelligent, and doesn't laugh at all. He is intelligent and doesn't laugh at all.

He is intelligent, and doesn't laugh at all. He is intelligent and doesn't laugh at all.

He always squats down in a chair or couch.


He always squats down in a chair or on a couch. He always squats down in a chair or on a couch.

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He always squats down ion a chair or couch. He always squats down on a chair or couch.

He always squats down in a chair or on a couch. He always squats down in a chair or on a couch.

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Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he always eats something sweet.


Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he is always eatsing something sweet. Also, he has a sweet tooth so he is always eating something.

When a person has a habit of doing something repeatedly, you can use the structure "always doing (thing)".

Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he is always eatsing something sweet. Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he is always eating something sweet.

Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he is always eatsing something sweet. Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he is always eating something sweet.

Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he is always eatsing something sweet. Also, he has a sweet tooth, so he is always eating something sweet.

I think that's an interesting gap in his personality.


I think that's an interesting gap in his personality. I think that's an interesting gap in his personality.

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I think that's an interesting gap incontrast to his personality. I think that's an interesting contrast to his personality.

Gap moe, right? Unfortunately there isn't quite a word like that in English.

I think that's an interesting gap in his personalityhis personality has interesting contrasts/quirks. I think his personality has interesting contrasts/quirks.

I think that's an interesting gap incontrast to his personality. I think that's an interesting contrast to his personality.

I think that' this is an interesting gap inpart of his personality. I think that this is an interesting part of his personality.

I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate, if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural.


I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate, if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural. I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural.

I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate, if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural. I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural.

I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate, it if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural. I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate it if you could fix my sentences to sound more natural.

I couldn'tdon't think I described him well, so I would appreciate, it if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural. I don't think I described him well, so I would appreciate it if you could fix my sentences to sound more natural.

I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate, it if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural. I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate it if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural.

I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate, it if you could fix my sentences to sounds more natural. I couldn't describe him well, so I would appreciate it if you could fix my sentences to sound more natural.

L the Death Note


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I'm assuming that you're talking about L, a character from Death Note

I'm going to write about the character L of Death Note again.


I'm going to write about the character L ofrom Death Note again. I'm going to write about the character L from Death Note again.

I'm going to write about the character L ofrom Death Note again. I'm going to write about the character L from Death Note again.

I'm going to write about the character L ofL from Death Note again. I'm going to write about L from Death Note again.

I'm going to write about the character L ofrom Death Note again. I'm going to write about the character L from Death Note again.

I'm going to writeing about a/the character L of/from Death Note again. I'm writing about a/the character L of/from Death Note again.

I rephrased your sentence to be more concise and offered suggestions on how you can rewrite your sentence.

There are two main characters called L and Light in the story.


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There are two main characters called, L and Light, in the story. There are two main characters, L and Light, in the story.

Or: "The story has two main characters, L and Light."

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I like L more than Light.


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He has a peculiar personality, yet is very attractive.


He has a peculiar personality, yet is very attractive. He has a peculiar personality yet is very attractive.

He has a peculiar personality, yet is very attractivecharming. He has a peculiar personality, yet is very charming.

魅力的 in English is closer to "charming". When describing people, "attractive" is more similar to 格好いい.

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He has a peculiar personality, yebut his quirks are very attractive. He has a peculiar personality, but his quirks are very attractive.

I think having a peculiar or "different" personality is not a negative thing, so "yet" sounds a little wrong (because it implies peculiar people can't be attractive)

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