There's a mountain called Nokogiri in the south of the Chiba prefecture in Japan.

There's also an overhang at the edge of the cliff on top, and you can take cool pictures there.

You can take a ropeway from the bottom to the middle, so you don't need to go up all the way.

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There's a mountain called Nokogiri in the south of Chiba prefecture, Japan.

It's not a high mountain, but you can see beautiful views and two big buddha statues partway throughon the way to the top.

There's also an overhang at theing cliff edge ofat the cliff on top, and you can take cool pictures there.

You can take a ropeway from the bottom to the middlehalf-way up the mountain, so you don't need to go upwalk all the way.

If you come to Japan, please try to visit the Mt Nokogiri in Chiba prefecture.

There's a mountain called Nokogiri in the south ofern part of Japan's Chiba prefecture Japan.

There's also an overhang at the edge of the cliff on top, and you can take cool pictures there.

You can take a ropeway from the bottom to the middle, so you don't need to go up all the way.

If you come to Japan, try to visit the Mt. Nokogiri in Chiba prefecture.

There's a mountain called Nokogiri in the south of Chiba prefecture Japan.

The sentence is fine, but if you want to sound a bit more natural: "In the southern area of Japan's Chiba prefecture, there's a mountain called Nokogiri."

It's not a high mountain, but you can see beautiful views and two big buddha statues partway throughon the way to the top.

"Partway through the top" could have several different meanings: one is that you could see the statues through a gap in the top of the mountains, another being that once you've reached the top, if you stand in the middle you can see the statues. Looking at the original Japanese text, I think "on the way" is the best fit.

There's also an overhang at the edge of the cliff on top, and you can take cool pictures there.

Remember to use "an" if the next word starts with a vowel sound.

You can take a ropeway from the bottom to the middle, so you don't need to go up all the way.

There's a mountain called Nokogiri in the south of Chiba prefecture in Japan.

There's also an overhang at the edge of the cliff on top, and you can take cool pictures there too.

Can also say "and you can take cool pictures there as well."

You can take a ropeway from the bottom to the middle, so you don't need to go up all the way.

If there is more than one ropeway, "a ropeway" is fine. If there is just one ropeway then "the ropeway".
I think "so you don't need to go all the way up." is slightly more natural.

Something I would say: "There's a ropeway that starts from the bottom up to the middle so you don't have to go all the way up." (one ropeway)
"There are ropeways.." (multiple ropeways)

IfWhen it's windy, you might experience a scary ropeway ride because it will sway in the wind.

I would have a panic attack! Heights are not my thing.

I changed "if" to "when" because "if" sounds like something hypothetical that could happen. It definitely has been windy before, so I think "when" is more appropriate.

If you come to Japan, try to visit the Mt Nokogiri in the Chiba prefecture.

Something I would say: "If you ever come to Japan, I highly recommend that you visit Mt Nokogiri in the Chiba prefecture."

I would appreciate it if you could help me sound more natural, even if you have to change whole sentences.

Something I would say: "I would greatly appreciate it if you guys could help me sound more natural, even if it means you have to change the full sentence."