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kikokun

May 4, 2025

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Mt. Fuji

I climbed the mountain. The path was steep, and each step was a struggle. Before long, I reached a flat area, and from between the surrounding mountains, Mount Fuji appeared before me.
Covered in snow, it radiated a dazzling light. In the clear blue sky, its brilliance was sublime and filled with majesty.


山を登った。道は険しく、一歩一歩がきつかった。ほどなくして平坦な場所にたどり着くと、山々の合間からちょうど富士山が姿を現した。雪に覆われていて、まばゆいばかりの光を放っていた。澄み切った青空の中でその輝きは、崇高で威厳に満ちていた。

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Mt. Fuji

I climbed the mountain.

The path was steep, and each step was a struggle.

Before long, I reached a flat area, and from between the surrounding mountains, Mount Fuji appeared before me.

Covered in snow, it radiated a dazzling light.

In the clear blue sky, its brilliance was sublime and filled with majesty.

This is grammatically correct, but it is very uncommon to use "majesty." It sounds like it is from a storybook.

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kikokun

May 6, 2025

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Thank you for your useful comment.

Mt. Fuji

I climbed the mountain.

The path was steep, and each step was a struggle.

Before long, I reached a flat area, and from between the surrounding mountains, Mount Fuji appeared before me.

Covered in snow, it radiated a dazzling light.

In the clear blue sky, its brilliance was sublime and filled with majesty.

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kikokun

May 5, 2025

2

Thanks.

Mt. Fuji

I climbed the mountain.

The path was steep, and each step was a struggle.

Before long, I reached a flat area, and from between the surrounding mountains, Mount Fuji appeared before me.

Covered in snow, it radiated a dazzling light.

In the clear blue sky, its brilliance was sublime and filled with majesty.

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Well done! This was a beautifully written entry.

Mt. Fuji

I climbed the mountain.

The path was steep, and each step was a struggle.

Before long, I reached a flat area, and from between the surrounding mountains, Mount Fuji appeared before me.

Covered in snow, it radiated a dazzling light.

In the clear blue sky, its brilliance was sublime and filled with majesty.

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kikokun

May 5, 2025

2

Thanks.

Mt. Fuji

I climbed the mountain.

The path was steep, and each step was a struggle.

Before long, I reached a flat area, and from between the surrounding mountains, Mount Fuji appeared before me.

Covered in snow, it radiated a dazzling light.

In the clear blue sky, its brilliance was sublime and filled with majesty.

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This sounds very poetic

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kikokun

May 5, 2025

2

Thank you for your comment.

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In the clear blue sky, its brilliance was sublime and filled with majesty.

This is grammatically correct, but it is very uncommon to use "majesty." It sounds like it is from a storybook.

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