March 25, 2022
I always run away.
I always run away.
I hadn't tried to change you.
I couldn't be your opponent.
You were so vicious and frightening.
I wasn't confident to be against you.
You would've made me a mess.
But I am not a coward.
I well know you'd be crushed by a stronger opponent.
I'm cultivating a village for the broken.
you would be broken oneday and sunk
as if broken pebbles are piled up on the sandbank.
There would b e full of broken pebbles like you.
A village for the broken,
I wouldn't be there, though,
you'll be able to find my trace.
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I always run away.
I always run away.
I hadn't tried to change you.
I couldn't be your opponent.
You were so vicious and frightening.
I wasn't confident enough to bego against you.
I wasn't confident enough to go against you.
You would've made me a mess.
But I am not a coward.
I well know you'd be crushed by a stronger opponent.
I'm cultivating a village for the broken.
yYou would'll be broken one day and sunken.
You'll be broken one day and sunken.
as ifLike broken pebbles are piled up on the sandbank.
Like broken pebbles piled upon the bank.
ThereIt would b e full of broken pebbles like you.
It would be full of broken pebbles like you.
A village for the broken,
I wouldn't be there, though,
but you'll be able to find my trace. but you'll be able to find my trace.
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It's hard to say what is "right" or "wrong" with poetry, since poetry is meant to break the rules. However, I tried to make the style of your writing flow nicely but keep the meaning similar! I hope you like :)
March 25, 2022
Thank you. I like it. ^^
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I wasn't confident to be against you.
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You would make me a mess. |
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I well know you'd be crushed by a stronger opponent. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm cultivating a village for the broken. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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you would be broken oneday and sunk
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as if broken pebbles are piled up on the sandbank.
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There would b e full of broken pebbles like you.
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I wouldn't be there, though, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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you'll be able to find my trace. but you'll be able to find my trace. but you'll be able to find my trace. |
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You would've made me a mess. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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