Feb. 14, 2024
The other day, I saw “Mrs Harris Goes to Paris” on Prime Video. Basically, the plot is about Mrs Harris, who is a widow working as a housekeeper in London in the 1950s, saves up to buy a Christian Dior’s dress and visits Paris.
I like the fashion show scene and the part where Mrs Harris wears a red Dior’s dress at the party. They’re stunning and captivating, but honestly, it wasn’t actually my type of film. Almost all of the characters are good people and Mrs Harris is too generous and sweet, but overall, I think it’s a comfort and cozy movie for most people, though.
Mrs. Harris Goes to Paris
Mrs. always has a period after it.
The other day, I saw “Mrs. Harris Goes to Paris” on Prime Video.
Same as before. Also to sound more natural, we sometimes just say Prime instead of Prime Video.
Basically, the plot is about Mrs. Harris, who is a widow working as a housekeeper in London in the 1950s,. She saves up to buy a Christian Dior’s dress and then visits Paris.
This sounds a bit more natural. Also saying a plot is about <blank> does something sounds off. You would normally say the plot is about <blank> who does something, but then you'd have two "who is a widow, who saves up" which is too many.
Also I think leaving this in present tense sounds natural because it's universally true. The plot was and still in about all of this.
I liked the fashion show scene and the part where Mrs. Harris wears a red Dior’s dress at the party.
We just say Dior dress, because that is the brand of the dress. It's like an adjective.
Also if you start the paragraph detailing your actions in past tense, best to keep the rest of your actions in past tense as well.
They’ were stunning and captivating, but honestly, it wasn’t actually my type of film.
Keep both in past tense.
Almost all of the characters awere good people and Mrs. Harris iwas too generous and sweet, but overall, I think it’s just a comfort and cozy movie for most people, though.
Keep it in past tense. Also remove the though, it sounds like it's just added at the end as an afterthough. But add a just in there to emphasize that the movie is ONLY this, and not something bigger or grander. Sounds a bit more natural.
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Ha, good recommendation, I might stay away from this movie then. :)
The other day, I saw “Mrs Harris Goes to Paris” on Prime Video.
Basically, the plot is about Mrs Harris, who is a widow working as a housekeeper in London in the 1950s,. She saves up to buy a Christian Dior’s dress and visits Paris.
I like the fashion show scene and the part where Mrs Harris wears a red Dior’s dress at the party.
They’re stunning and captivating, but honestly, it wasn’t actually my type of film.
Almost all of the characters are good people and Mrs Harris is too generous and sweet, but overall, I think it’s a comfort and cozy movie for most people, though.
Mrs Harris Goes to Paris Mrs. Harris Goes to Paris Mrs. always has a period after it. |
The other day, I saw “Mrs Harris Goes to Paris” on Prime Video. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The other day, I saw “Mrs. Harris Goes to Paris” on Prime Video. Same as before. Also to sound more natural, we sometimes just say Prime instead of Prime Video. |
Basically, the plot is about Mrs Harris, who is a widow working as a housekeeper in London in the 1950s, saves up to buy a Christian Dior’s dress and visits Paris. Basically, the plot is about Mrs Harris, who is a widow working as a housekeeper in London in the 1950s Basically, the plot is about Mrs. Harris, who is a widow working as a housekeeper in London in the 1950s This sounds a bit more natural. Also saying a plot is about <blank> does something sounds off. You would normally say the plot is about <blank> who does something, but then you'd have two "who is a widow, who saves up" which is too many. Also I think leaving this in present tense sounds natural because it's universally true. The plot was and still in about all of this. |
I like the fashion show scene and the part where Mrs Harris wears a red Dior’s dress at the party. I like the fashion show scene and the part where Mrs Harris wears a red Dior I liked the fashion show scene and the part where Mrs. Harris wears a red Dior We just say Dior dress, because that is the brand of the dress. It's like an adjective. Also if you start the paragraph detailing your actions in past tense, best to keep the rest of your actions in past tense as well. |
They’re stunning and captivating, but honestly, it wasn’t actually my type of film. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They Keep both in past tense. |
Almost all of the characters are good people and Mrs Harris is too generous and sweet, but overall, I think it’s a comfort and cozy movie for most people, though. Almost all of the characters are good people and Mrs Harris is too generous and sweet, but overall, I think it’s a comfort and cozy movie for most people Almost all of the characters Keep it in past tense. Also remove the though, it sounds like it's just added at the end as an afterthough. But add a just in there to emphasize that the movie is ONLY this, and not something bigger or grander. Sounds a bit more natural. |
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