My Simple Day. My Simple Day

No need for the period

I wake up at 8 am, then I run aton the street for one kilometer around my neighborhood , then I do exercises atin the field near my house, where I live. I wake up at 8 am, then I run on the street for one kilometer around my neighborhood, then I do exercises in the field near my house.

"Where I live" is redundant, when you say "my house" we know you live there

After that, I drink some coffee and after start goetting ready for my work. After that, I drink some coffee and start getting ready for work.

I work at the office three days on thea week, and 2two days a week I work from home (Monday and Friday),. Saturday and Sunday are the weekends. I work at the office three days a week, and two days a week I work from home (Monday and Friday). Saturday and Sunday are the weekend.

"3 days / 2 days" or "three days / two days" are ok, but mixing them with "three days / 2 days" is slightly awkward

I spend a onet takes an hour and a half to reach my work /office. It takes an hour and a half to reach my work/office.

Choosing just one word (work or office) is cleaner here

I go for ato work by subway, but sometimes by car. I go to work by subway, but sometimes by car.

Now it's warm in our area and way is enough(the weather?) is comfortable enough. Now it's warm in our area and (the weather?) is comfortable enough.

I didn't understand what you mean by "way" here. Did you mean weather? Or did you mean "way" as your commute? If so, "...and the commute is comfortable enough"

Now I am looking for a new job, because I would like to work fully remote. Now I am looking for a new job because I would like to work fully remote.

Yesterday I got a career advice, and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish this, and. I will continue tomorrow. Yesterday I got career advice, and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish. I will continue tomorrow.