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Hello. This is my first post. From this autum, I will be a bachelor student of foregin( the country is secret:) ) univercsity student. The level of english in university will be pretty much high. However my english is kind of trush so i am so afraid of not followling (like cannot ) class. Ever since AI is improved, non native english people tend not make the engloish sentence by myself. Obviously I am the one too. Nevertheless, I do not want to rely AI anymore. I want to have real power to make wondeful sentence in English. That why I deceided to start this daily. I hope someone look my daily.


こんにちは。これが私の最初の投稿になります。 この秋から私はどこか外国の大学生になります。大学での英語のレベルはとても高いものになるでしょう。しかしわたしの英語力は正直ごみのようです。クラスについていけなくなるかもしれないと思っています。AIが進歩してから非ネイティブは自分自身によって英語の文章を作らなくなるようになりました。私もその一人です。しかし私はこれ以上AIに頼りたくないです。自分自身の力で英語の文章を作れるようになりたいです。これがわたしが英語の日記を始めた理由です。誰かが見てくれるといいな。

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My first post

Hello.

This is my first post.

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Hello.


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This is my first post.


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Nevertheless, I do not want to rely AI anymore.


NHowevertheless, I do not want to rely AI anymore. However, I do not want to rely AI anymore.

I think "however" is a better choice than "nevertheless". There is an extremely slight difference between the two, and I feel an explanation of it will be much too convoluted and probably ineffective. Don't worry about for now. I think it'll have to come with repeated exposure.

I want to have real power to make wondeful sentence in English.


I want to have real power to make wondeful sentences in English. I want to have real power to make wondeful sentences in English.

Sentences or a sentence

I want to have real power to make wondefulthe ability to form sentences in English myself. I want to have the ability to form sentences in English myself.

I want to have the real power to make wonderful sentences in English. I want to have the real power to make wonderful sentences in English.

"real power" is okay, but I personally prefer "the real power".

That why I deceided to start this daily.


That is why I deceided to start doing this daily. That is why I deceided to start doing this daily.

That why I deceided to start this dailry. That why I deceided to start this dairy.

That is why I deceided to start doing this daily. That is why I decided to start doing this daily.

I hope someone look my daily.


I hope that someone can look at my daily. entries I hope that someone can look at my daily entries

Is this what you meant to say

I hope someone look my dailywill read it. I hope someone will read it.

I hope (that) someone can look myat my posts daily. I hope (that) someone can look at my posts daily.

From this autum, I will be a bachelor student of foregin( the country is secret:) ) univercsity student.


From this autum, I will be a bachelor student of foregin( the country is secret:) ) univercsity student. From this autum, I will be a bachelor student of foregin( the country is secret:) ) univercsity student.

From this Autumn I’ll be a bachelor student of a foreign university (the country of where this university is, is a secret)

FStarting from this autumn, I will be a bachelorn undergraduate student ofat a foregin( ign (the country is secret:) ) univercsity student. Starting from this autumn, I will be an undergraduate student at a foreign (the country is secret:) ) university.

From this autumn on, I will be a bachelor student of a foregin( ign university (the country is secret :) ) univercsity student. From this autumn on, I will be a bachelor student of a foreign university (the country is secret :) ).

Alternatively: "Starting from this autumn".

The level of english in university will be pretty much high.


TheMy level of eEnglish in university will be pretty muchwill be high. My level of English will be high

Not sure what you’re trying to say here. Is it that you’ll be studying in English so practicing the language at a high level? Or you hope your English will improve to a high level?

The level of eEnglish in universityused there will be pretty much high. The level of English used there will be pretty high.

The levelstandard of eEnglish in university will be pretty much high. The standard of English in university will be pretty high.

(1) "level of English" is understandable, but not the best way to put it. Consider "standard of English". (2) "English" is a proper noun and should always be capitalised.

However my english is kind of trush so i am so afraid of not followling (like cannot ) class.


However my english is kind of trushty so i am so afraid of not followling (like cannot )being able to follow the classes. However my english is kind of rusty so i am afraid of not being able to follow the classes.

Tush I’ve not heard this word used before maybe it’s American. I’d say rusty to show it’s something that you find hard and need to improve

However my eEnglish is kind of truash so iI am sovery afraid of not followling (like cannot )being able to keep up with my classes. However my English is kind of trash so I am very afraid of not being able to keep up with my classes.

However, my eEnglish is kind of truash, so iI am so afraid of not followling (like cannot )being able to follow in class. However, my English is kind of trash, so I am afraid of not being able to follow in class.

(1) This isn't necessary, since this sentence isn't that lengthy, but you can consider introducing some comma breaks. (2) "I" should always be capitalised. (3) "so I am so afraid" isn't wrong, but the repetition of "so" might sound jarring to native ears. Alternatively: "However, my English is kind of trash, and I am so afraid of..."

Ever since AI is improved, non native english people tend not make the engloish sentence by myself.


Ever since AI is improvedcame in , non native english speopleakers tend not make thto use it to write eEngloish sentence by myself.s rather than use it themselves Ever since AI came in , non native english speakers tend to use it to write English sentences rather than use it themselves

Are you talking about non natives or yourself? I’ve not been forming English sentences myself or non natives are using Ai to write sentences in English?

Ever since AI is improved, non -native eEnglish speopleakers tend not make thwrite eEngloish sentence by myselfs themselves. Ever since AI improved, non-native English speakers tend not write English sentences themselves.

Ever since AI ihas improved, non -native eEnglish speopleakers tend not to make the eEngloish sentences by myselfthemselves. Ever since AI has improved, non-native English speakers tend not to make English sentences by themselves.

(1) "Ever since" implies that AI's improvement occurred in the past. Hence, it should be "has", not "is" (past tense). (2) "non" is followed by a hyphen. (3) Turning "the English sentence" plural makes more sense I think. When you use "the", you're referring to a specific English sentence, while the plural form refers to English sentences in general.

Obviously I am the one too.


Obviously I am the one too. Obviously I am one too.

I am one, I’m one of them is better than I am the one. The one indicates you’re unique if you add the preposition

Obviously I am the onone of those people too. Obviously I am one of those people too.

Obviously I am thone onef them too. Obviously I am one of them too.

You can consider adding "of them". When you say "I am one too", it could mean that you're also a non-native English speaker, but not necessarily one that uses AI. Using "of them" helps to clear up this ambiguity.

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