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Aslidgru

July 19, 2026

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Lake Mälaren

I live in a small island in Stockholm. I have moved here for 5 months ago. Since moved there I'm feeling very lucky because there is a big lake which is 5 min from my house. It's called Mälaren. It's really clean and suitable for swimming. On the other hand the water we drink is also supplied from this lake. When weather is sunny people meet by the lake for the picnic which are living in island. Someone prefer to sunbathe while reading a book.
I am trying to go to the Mälaren everyday. It's my favorite spot in the island. Sometimes I do embroidery by the lake. Sometimes just sitting and refresh my mind. I think it's my mindfulness practice. I'm full of gratefulness about nature.

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Lake Mälaren

It's called Mälaren.

It's really clean and suitable for swimming.

Sometimes I do embroidery by the lake.

I think it's my mindfulness practice.

I'm full of gratefulness about nature.

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Aslidgru

July 19, 2026

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Lake Mälaren


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I live in a small island in Stockholm.


I live ion a small island in Stockholm. I live on a small island in Stockholm.

I have moved here for 5 months ago.


I have moved here for 5 months ago. I moved here 5 months ago.

I have moved here for 5 months ago. I moved here 5 months ago.

Or, "I have been here for five months".

Since moved there I'm feeling very lucky because there is a big lake which is 5 min from my house.


Since moved there I'm feeling very lucky to have moved here, because there is a big lake which is 5 minutes from my house. I'm feeling very lucky to have moved here, because there is a big lake which is 5 minutes from my house.

Since I moved there, I'm feeling have felt very lucky because there is a big lake which is 5 min from my house. Since I moved here, I have felt very lucky because there is a big lake which is 5 min from my house.

Because you are there now, it is "here" from your perspective instead of "there", if that makes sense.

It's called Mälaren.


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It's really clean and suitable for swimming.


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On the other hand the water we drink is also supplied from this lake.


On the other handAdditionally, the water we drink is also supplied from this lake. Additionally, the water we drink is also supplied from this lake.

"On the other hand" emphasizes the difference between two things while "additionally" allows you to add more information about a previous discussed topic

On the other hand, the water we drink is also supplied from this lake. On the other hand, the water we drink is also supplied from this lake.

When weather is sunny people meet by the lake for the picnic which are living in island.


When the weather is sunny, people who live on the island meet by the lake for thea picnic which are living in island. When the weather is sunny, people who live on the island meet by the lake for a picnic.

When the weather is sunny, people living on the island meet by the lake for thea picnic which are living in island. When the weather is sunny, people living on the island meet by the lake for a picnic.

Mostly preference here, except islands are always lived on, not in. ✅ I live on an island. He used to live on an island. We all spend time on that island. ❌️ I live in an island. He used to live in an island. We all spend time in that island.

Someone prefer to sunbathe while reading a book.


Someon people prefer to sunbathe while reading a book. Some people prefer to sunbathe while reading a book.

"Someone" refers to a single, unknown person while I believe you were trying to show that a selection out of a group of people like to read their books.

I am trying to go to the Mälaren everyday.


I am trying to go to the Mälaren everyday. I am trying to go to Mälaren everyday.

I am trying to go to the Mälaren everyday. I am trying to go to Mälaren everyday.

Usually, you don't need "the" in front of proper place names. It is more common with generic places, like just "lake": ✅ I am trying to go to the lake every day. I am trying to go to Mälaren everyday. I go to the grocery story every day.

It's my favorite spot in the island.


It's my favorite spot ion the island. It's my favorite spot on the island.

It's my favorite spot ion the island. It's my favorite spot on the island.

Sometimes I do embroidery by the lake.


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Sometimes just sitting and refresh my mind.


Sometimes I just sitting and refresh my mind. Sometimes I just sit and refresh my mind.

Sometimes just sittingI just sit and refresh my mind. Sometimes just I just sit and refresh my mind.

In complete sentence without a subject... in this case, "I"!

I think it's my mindfulness practice.


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I'm full of gratefulness about nature.


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I'm full of gratefulness aboutgrateful for nature. I'm grateful for nature.

Mostly my personal preference here.

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