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hiratecs

Nov. 26, 2024

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Moving Home

Since I'm bad at thinking of topics to write about, I've just decided to google random topics that I can give my opinion, like this one. It's like a challenge to write about things I've never tried before. The chosen one was "Moving Home."

I've always lived in the same house that I was born. I mean, I still live with my parents, which is pretty common here in Brazil. Because of the bad economic conditions and the cultural importance of family bonding that we have here, we usually choose staying in our parents' house until our marriage. Of course this isn't a rule, but it frequently happens. People here can't survive on minimum wage, especially because rent prices are high. Saving a significant amount of money before moving, even if it means sacrificing some of our privacy, is totally fine in my opinion. After all, our family should support our future when we need. The exception is if your parents are also struggling to sustain themselves, so you have to help them instead. That's just my opinion, don't take it too seriously if you disagree.

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Moving From Home

Since I'm bad at thinking of topics to write about, I've just decided to google random topics that I can give my opinion, like on. I've chosen this one.

The end of the sentence sounds a bit awkward so I changed it.

It' feels like a challenge to write about things I've never tried before.

The chosen one was "Moving From Home."

I've always lived in the same house that I was born in.

I mean, I still live with my parents, which is pretty common here in Brazil.

Because of the bad economic conditions and the cultural importance of family bonding that we have here, we usually choose staying/to stay in our parents' house until our marriage.

Of course this isn't a rule, but it frequently happens.

People here can't survive on minimum wage, especially because rent prices are high.

Saving a significant amount of money before moving, even if it means sacrificing some of our privacy, is totally fine in my opinion.

After all, our family should support our future when we need.

The exception is if your parents are also struggling to sustain themselves, so you have to help them instead.

That's just my opinion, don't take it too seriously if you disagree.

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Eu concordo! Apesar de morar no Reino Unido, minha família é da África então é muito comum ficar com a familia até o casamento. Boa escrita!

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hiratecs

Nov. 27, 2024

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Que bacana! De que país da África eles são?

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judar

Nov. 27, 2024

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Somália :))

Moving away from Home

Since I'm bad at thinking of topics to write about, I've just decided to google random topics that I can give my opinion, on like this one.

It's like a challenge to write about thingopics I've never tried before.

The chosen onone I chose was "Moving away from Home."

I've always lived in the same house that I was born in.

By that I mean, I still live with my parents, which is pretty common here in Brazil.

Because of the badpoor economic conditions and the cultural iemportancehasis ofn family bonding that we have here, we usually choose to staying in our parents' house until our marriage.

Of course this isn't athe rule, but it frequently happens.

People here can't survive on minimum wage, especially because rent prices are high.

Saving a significant amount of money before moving, even if it means sacrificing some of our privacy, is totally fine in my opinion.

After all, our family should support our future when we need it.

The exception is if your parents are also struggling to sustain themselves, so that you have to help them instead.

That's just my opinion, d though. Don't take it too seriously if you disagree.

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Overall, you present a very good level in English writing. Keep it up!

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hiratecs

Nov. 27, 2024

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Thanks!

Moving Home

Since I'm bad at thinking of topics to write about, I've just decided to google random topics that I can give my opinion on, like this one.

It's like a challenge to write about things I've never tried (or "experienced") before.

The chosen onetopic was "Moving Home."

Or "the topic I chose was 'Moving Home'." This sounds a little more natural.

Also, periods usually come after/outside the quotation marks. "Moving Home." --> "Moving Home".

I've always lived in the same house thatsince I was born.

I mean, I still live with my parents, which is pretty common here in Brazil.

Because of the bad economic conditions and the cultural importance of family bonding that we have here, we usually choose to staying in our parents' house until our marriage.

Of course this isn't a rule, but it frequently happens.

People here can't survive on minimum wage, especially because rent prices are high.

Saving a significant amount of money before moving, even if it means sacrificing some of our privacy, is totally fine in my opinion.

After all, our family should support our future when we need it/them.

Use "it" if you're referring to support.
Use "them" if you're referring to families.

The exception is if your parents are also struggling to sustain themselves, so you have to help them instead.

That's just my opinion, don't take it too seriously if you disagree.

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Well said! I agree that parents should be willing to take care of their children until they are ready to leave home and provide for themselves. But it's a bit of an unpopular concept in North America.

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hiratecs

Nov. 27, 2024

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Thanks for your feedback!

Moving Home


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Moving away from Home

Moving From Home

Since I'm bad at thinking of topics to write about, I've just decided to google random topics that I can give my opinion, like this one.


Since I'm bad at thinking of topics to write about, I've just decided to google random topics that I can give my opinion on, like this one.

Since I'm bad at thinking of topics to write about, I've just decided to google random topics that I can give my opinion, on like this one.

Since I'm bad at thinking of topics to write about, I've just decided to google random topics that I can give my opinion, like on. I've chosen this one.

The end of the sentence sounds a bit awkward so I changed it.

It's like a challenge to write about things I've never tried before.


It's like a challenge to write about things I've never tried (or "experienced") before.

It's like a challenge to write about thingopics I've never tried before.

It' feels like a challenge to write about things I've never tried before.

The chosen one was "Moving Home."


The chosen onetopic was "Moving Home."

Or "the topic I chose was 'Moving Home'." This sounds a little more natural. Also, periods usually come after/outside the quotation marks. "Moving Home." --> "Moving Home".

The chosen onone I chose was "Moving away from Home."

The chosen one was "Moving From Home."

I've always lived in the same house that I was born.


I've always lived in the same house thatsince I was born.

I've always lived in the same house that I was born in.

I've always lived in the same house that I was born in.

I mean, I still live with my parents, which is pretty common here in Brazil.


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By that I mean, I still live with my parents, which is pretty common here in Brazil.

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Because of the bad economic conditions and the cultural importance of family bonding that we have here, we usually choose staying in our parents' house until our marriage.


Because of the bad economic conditions and the cultural importance of family bonding that we have here, we usually choose to staying in our parents' house until our marriage.

Because of the badpoor economic conditions and the cultural iemportancehasis ofn family bonding that we have here, we usually choose to staying in our parents' house until our marriage.

Because of the bad economic conditions and the cultural importance of family bonding that we have here, we usually choose staying/to stay in our parents' house until our marriage.

Of course this isn't a rule, but it frequently happens.


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Of course this isn't athe rule, but it frequently happens.

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People here can't survive on minimum wage, especially because rent prices are high.


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Saving a significant amount of money before moving, even if it means sacrificing some of our privacy, is totally fine in my opinion.


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After all, our family should support our future when we need.


After all, our family should support our future when we need it/them.

Use "it" if you're referring to support. Use "them" if you're referring to families.

After all, our family should support our future when we need it.

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The exception is if your parents are also struggling to sustain themselves, so you have to help them instead.


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The exception is if your parents are also struggling to sustain themselves, so that you have to help them instead.

The exception is if your parents are also struggling to sustain themselves, so you have to help them instead.

That's just my opinion, don't take it too seriously if you disagree.


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That's just my opinion, d though. Don't take it too seriously if you disagree.

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