Dec. 12, 2024
Moving from house to apartment
My roommate moved back home, so I decided to move out of the current house to an apartment. I am so lucky to find a sublet apartment with two bedrooms with a kitchen, and a living room, and only $1200 a month including heat, water and an outdoor parking place. The former tenant is a Korean family who have been living there consistently for 10 years, and they have around $400 discount a month. It's a great deal for me.
我的室友回家乡了， 所以我决定从现住的独立屋搬到公寓。我很庆幸的找到了一个转租的公寓，有2个卧室，一个厨房和公用大厅，一月1200元，包括暖气，水和一个室外停车位。之前的一个韩国家庭在这里连续租了10年，他们每月有约400元的优惠。这是一个很好的交易。
Moving from a house to an apartment
My roommate moved back home, so I decided to move out of themy current house to an apartment.
I amwas so lucky to find a sublet apartment with two bedrooms with a kitchen, and a living room, and only $1200 a month including heat, water, and an outdoor parking place.
The former tenant is a Korean family who haved been living there consistently for 10 years, and they have around a $400 a month discount a month.
It's a great deal for me.
Dec. 12, 2024
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Moving from house to apartment
My roommate moved back home, so I decided to move out of theour current house to an apartment.
You have already introduced the house in the heading.
I am so lucky to find a sublet apartment withat has two bedrooms with, a kitchen, and a living room, and only. It only costs $1200 a month including heat, water and an outdoor parking place.
The former tenant iwas a Korean family who have been living there consistently for 10 years, and they haved around $400 discount aevery month.
For coherence in tenses, stick to past, past continuous or present.
It's a great deal for me.
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Dec. 12, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
Dec. 13, 2024
Anytime Scarlett.
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My roommate moved back home, so I decided to move out of the current house to an apartment. My roommate moved back home, so I decided to move out of You have already introduced the house in the heading. My roommate moved back home, so I decided to move out of |
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I am so lucky to find a sublet apartment with two bedrooms with a kitchen, and a living room, and only $1200 a month including heat, water and an outdoor parking place. I am so lucky to find a sublet apartment I |
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The former tenant is a Korean family who have been living there consistently for 10 years, and they have around $400 discount a month. The former tenant For coherence in tenses, stick to past, past continuous or present. The former tenant is a Korean family who ha |
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