Aug. 25, 2025
Movie speech to correct
In 1994 in France, Amin wishes to live of the scripts that he writes in Paris. At summer, he comes back to the south of France, where he lived when he was young with his parents, that run a tunisian restaurant in Sète. Amin sees his family and old friends again, like his flirty cousin Tony or his bestfriend Ophelie; he shares his time between his family’s restaurant, the local pubs and the beach, where nice tourists come to sunbathe. While Tony has success with gals, Amin is pretty shy. He finds an occupation of taking photos of the Mediterranean coast, that the light hypnotizes him, and he searches for inspiration for his futures movies.
AtDuring the summer, he comes back to the south of France, where he lived with his parents when he was young with h. His parents, that run a tTunisian restaurant in Sète.
Amin sees his family and old friends again, like his flirty cousin Tony and/or his best friend Ophelie; he shares his time between his family’s restaurant, the local pubs and the beach, where nice tourists come to sunbathe.
While Tony has success with gals, Amin is pretty shy.
He finds an occupation of taking photos of the Mediterranean coast, (that the light hypnotizes him,) and he searches for inspiration for his futures movies.
I don’t understand this phrase “that the light hypnotized hum”
Aug. 26, 2025
He spends his time photographing the Mediterranean coast, captivated by its fascinating light, and looks for inspiration for his future films.
Aug. 26, 2025
I would say, “…captivated by its fascinating lightS, and,..”
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In 1994 in France, Amin wishes to live of the scripts that he writes in Paris. |
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At summer, he comes back to the south of France, where he lived when he was young with his parents, that run a tunisian restaurant in Sète.
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Amin sees his family and old friends again, like his flirty cousin Tony or his bestfriend Ophelie; he shares his time between his family’s restaurant, the local pubs and the beach, where nice tourists come to sunbathe. Amin sees his family and old friends again, like his flirty cousin Tony and/or his best friend Ophelie; he shares his time between his family’s restaurant, the local pubs and the beach, where nice tourists come to sunbathe. |
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While Tony has success with gals, Amin is pretty shy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He finds an occupation of taking photos of the Mediterranean coast, that the light hypnotizes him, and he searches for inspiration for his futures movies. He finds an occupation of taking photos of the Mediterranean coast, (that the light hypnotizes him,) and he searches for inspiration for his futures movies. I don’t understand this phrase “that the light hypnotized hum” |
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